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He's Coming Back |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I was not here when... He walked on this earth. No witness was I to... His humble birth. I did not hold his hand... as he preached by the sea. But He's coming back... and He's coming for me. I did not see him... raise men from the dead. I was not in the crowd when... the thousands were fed. I never touched His feet.. washed them with my hair. But He's going to meet me... in the midst of the air. He's coming back, oh yes... He's coming back. The moon will be blood... and the sky will be black. He'll split the sky and... take all who are his. He's coming back... I know that He is. I was not there when... He marched up that hill. When they ordered His death... and His blood they did spill. These eyes never saw... that old cross of shame. Though even back then He... already knew my name. I never touched the tomb... where His body did lay. But without a doubt I know... He is not there today. For He left that grave... on day number three. But He's coming back... and He's coming for me. He's coming back, oh yes... He's coming back. The moon will be blood and... the sky will be black. He'll split the sky and... take all who are His. He's coming back... I know that He is. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have wonderful spiritual convictions to fall back on..wish you the best. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Absolutely beautiful TA.......you warmed my heart with this piece~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
ethome -- One's spiritual convictions are the one thing that no one can take away. The Lord is a very real and special part of my life. Thank you for taking the time to respond. BDC -- Your responses are always very special to me. Thank you for your kindness!  < !signature-->--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- [This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, TennesseeAngel~ It is so and you have told it well. This is truly such a lovely piece. I'm going to invite some of the wonderful folks from the Spiritual Forum in to take a look-see. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
This is one beautiful piece showing forth a lovely trusting faith and holy anticipation- a wonderful job here-- And thanks You Marge for let us know this Gem was here, David |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a beautiful and inspirational poem, straight from the heart Tennessee Angel! I too admire your wonderful convictions. Thank you for this lovely read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I can echo all the replies by saying this poem is an inspirational treasure. Thanks to Marge's alert, I have the honor of enjoying your glorious faith. Thank you, ellie You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wonderful spiritual message and so beautifully written, You must come share your faith with us at the spiritual forum. Love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
TA - Yes He is!!! You have certainly done a wonderful job of saying it is so with this beautifully written poem. Looking forward to reading more. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tennessee, this is absolutely astounding! As a moderator in Spiritual Journeys, I invite you to come in, read, and share as you want your gifts and talents! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! This is a great message!  Thanks Marge for directing me here!I hope you'll come and join us in the spiritual forum as well. I'm sure others there would really enjoy your work as I did. This is well written with a great message carried in it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Angel, I certainly can't figure out how I missed this poem of yours. Blinking again, I guess. A very powerful spiritual writing. Thanks for sharing. |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
Chrisdt is alive and he is coming back to take that which is his. Hold strong to your faith and convictions and he shall take you with him. Remember, we can do all things through him who gives us strength. "Drink Life as it Comes. Striaght. No Chaser!" "Trust in the Lord always and he will lift you up!" |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Marge -- Thank you so much for being such a wonderful friend here in the forum. You made me feel so welcome right from the start. I was particularly proud of this poem. It came so easily that I knew it must have been inspired. Love ya girl! David -- Thank you for your kind response and for taking the time to change forums and read this piece of mine. God Bless! Kit -- Thanks so much for your sweet response. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Lady Lost -- Thank you for coming to this forum to read my piece. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed the read. Ellie -- Thank you for your kind responses. I would be more than happy to join everyone in the spiritual forum. BSC -- Thank you for your ever so kind comments. Sunshine -- Thank you for the wonderful invite and the glowing compliments. I will definately join you in the forum!! WhtDove -- Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my work! Bill, Bill, Bill -- Now you know better than to blink. Who knows what you might miss! Thanks for reading my work and responding so kindly! Richard -- Amen! Amen! Amen! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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