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The Pain In Her Eyes

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MexicanLover13
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Crying loudly,Pushing tears at night
Wondering when this pain will stop
Abuse and neglect slashes to the face
Cuts and bruises, punched here and there
Black and blue from top to bottom
Being throwin, holes in the wall
He says im sorry, but does it again
I lay here silent bleeding to death
This time he's got me, where i cant see
Where i cant breath, I hear him laughing
He's just luaghing at me, As i lay here dieing
I ask him why, I stare at him looking in his eye's
I hope he can see what im going through for him
The pain i take just to be his
The knife cuts in me harder as i screech for my last breath
I tell him i'm sorry, That i couldnt be his
I plead to him askin please
Don't let me lay here and die for you're needs


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I'm on the fence about this one, but am going to push it to open forum regardless, as the discussions forums are for the purpose of discussion and poetry is more likely to be recognized in the forums specifically designated for poetry.
 
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