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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2001-11-13 10:20 PM


Looked into the dark, I saw you.
You seemed to be kind, you seemed to be nice.
You held out your hand, smiling at me.
I was scared, I didn’t know what to do.
You comforted me, you prayed for me.
You held me in your arms, you gave me warm.
I wanted to trust you, but I was afraid.
I wanted to hold your hand, I needed you.
Looked into your eyes, I was afraid no more.
I held your hand, I was afraid to be lost.
You held me tight, you led me to light.
You gave me strength to overcome all.
I ought to thank you, but I don’t know how.
I asked your name, but you just smiled.
You didn’t asked for anything,
You just helped me grow to be a stronger man.
I wanted to see you again, I heard a voice said you’re always with me.
I knew this is true and I felt comfort.
I knew this is true because you said it to me.


Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-11-16 03:57 PM


Hey there...

I've transferred this to Open 17 as it's more appropriate there...

Here's a link to your poem:
/pip/Forum52/HTML/000235.html

Thanks

K

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