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Name some of the most overused words here on the forum to describe something....

I think awesome should be outlawed!!!

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1 posted 2000-11-06 07:11 PM


wonderful
excellent
incredible
heartfelt
touching
amazing

uhh. . . give me a few minutes. . . I'll come up with some more. . .

I know, I know. . .I use a lot of these words too. . . you got a better idea??    I'm all ears. . .

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Romy
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2 posted 2000-11-06 09:54 PM


I am sooo guilty of all of the above! (except awesome)

Here are more that I overuse!
Enchanting
glittering
gleaming
beautiful
magical


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3 posted 2000-11-06 11:15 PM


Lovely, good, well written, well done, wow, thoughtful, enlightening, dark, shining,forceful, soft, sensuous, erotic, exotic, fascinating. Gee, too many to list actually. Some seldom used ones?-- terrible, sucks, bad, awful, nauseating, (though I am sure Philip will get around to them if he reads enough of my poems...lol     )


Jamie

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"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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4 posted 2000-11-06 11:22 PM


Lame phrase I use "wonderful imagery"...geesh..and I have a hard time (no pun intended) to say something uplifting(no pun intended) about the poetry in Adult..you know you can only read so much erotica before you run out of things to say!!! LOL
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5 posted 2000-11-07 12:34 PM


crystal

shhh... don't tell anyone

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6 posted 2000-11-07 04:02 AM


Firstly - K is gobsmacked:

An admittance...

don't ever use crystal again C...EVER...I could mention blue in certain contexts for you also.

Me...I get stuck sometimes...with what to say - I absolutely refuse to gush on the forums...so I guess my replies might sometimes sound dry.

Nauseating could be fun - hey Jamie - mind if I use that on your next poem....??? Replete with over used words too...

HAHA...

An example:

'Jamie, this poem is nauseating, an ABSOLUTELY appalling attempt at poetry using classic rhetoric and overdone themes...a MASTERPIECE of cliche! WOW! (There's a big one I am trying very hard to avoid unless I really did say wow out loud...) I am really IMPRESSED. INSPIRED even...

You have MOVED me so much I am stationary in my seat with TEARS IN MY EYES - at the impact this complete drivel has had on my HEART.

OH JAMIE WILL I EVER BE THE SAME?

Oh btw - this sucks.

NICE work.'

Whaddya think? Will it go down well?

I am excrutiatingly guilty of the 'well done' syndrome. My verbal steak is a little piece of fried leather...languishing on the rubbish tip...

So - what is the solution?

I mean - there are only so many adjectives aren't there?

We could use other languages!
We could...INVENT words (I like that idea...)
We could have a weekly Passion's antonym day...just to be different...

Sigh

Or we could go on using the overused...

lol

K




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Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

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7 posted 2000-11-07 04:09 AM


*Waving hand - here I am again!*

I forgot to mention how GREAT this idea was Sharon...and to remind Jamie that he used THOUGHTFUL on my last poem lol...heh heh...

K

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8 posted 2000-11-07 04:16 AM


i didnt read all ya'lls blatherings...okoko that wasn't an example but it could work yuh "i didnt even read yur blatherings" heheheh

here are mine

fine poem
good poem
great poem

o and ok who is gonna outlaw an overused word as this "YUH"

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9 posted 2000-11-07 05:00 AM


Hey Walt, I think "blatherings" is a FINE example of the right word to use. It's so GREAT that I am inspired to use it in my next poem! and "yuh" is another GOOD one too! LOL
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10 posted 2000-11-07 06:34 AM


How about.....

POWERFUL
SUPERB
ROMANTIC
and
ENJOYABLE  

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11 posted 2000-11-07 08:59 AM


LOL...all of you!!!

Ok..let's find some new words!!!!

We could make some up - I love this idea.

"Jamie, your poem touched me. It is klaindifly and percolentate. Never have I read a poem of such glockinseffin!!"

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12 posted 2000-11-07 12:00 PM


I have never read such interific writing as I have here. . . it just emulates with such perfound phantasmic stress, that I am annoyzed by it's simmering. . .



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13 posted 2000-11-07 12:28 PM


Glad to see I'm not the only one burnt out.
and this is on a "natch" too.
sigh, danged if I do, and danged if I don't.

But ya'll left me smiling. Just what I needed. A case of writer's block on replies...ROFL....

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14 posted 2000-11-07 03:17 PM


LOVE

nuff said

Alicat the Persnikitty

If I were any more laid back, I'd be in a coma.


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15 posted 2000-11-07 03:50 PM


ok- fair- not bad-

ok?
so, no fair using me in all the examples. though they are not bad.


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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16 posted 2000-11-07 03:57 PM


ooops! I almost forgot. Isn't this whole thing just....

AWESOME





Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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17 posted 2000-11-07 05:26 PM


EXCEPTIONAL guys!!!!

Making up  YIPPEE!!!
            YIPPEE!!!
             YIPPEE!!!

Ahem.

Well Jamie hon - you started the whole opposite thing...so it's only natural you get picked on. Lol..


Oh Sven - phantasmic stress...I LIKE that...
and Sharon hon - klaindifly this has to become an official word...

Right...no more writer's block on words....

This is the place of refresh! (If I use 'klaindifly' now - you are all going to know what it means right?)

a NICE reply: (Not to Jamie...   )

'Debbie...your poem fluicrates..it simply jisticucors with shume...I am overdrewed.

Well curtained!'

lol

K


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18 posted 2000-11-07 06:02 PM


Another that's over-used and should go:

"Chris, get a shirt on! "



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19 posted 2000-11-07 07:04 PM


Since we're alone here (we are right?) I'll tell you that some of these words are being used right now..as we speak..only they are MISSPELLED words. So some may think our 'new and improved' words are just misspelled!!!

Now..go to your dictionaries....find some new words!! NOW....list them here..

We need words that can be used to describe poetry here (and NO it can't be a 'c' word that rhymes with tap!)  

Note to Jamie: We pick on you 'cause YOU don't whine when we do!!  

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20 posted 2000-11-07 09:10 PM


3 madeup words


friglog--frig/log- frig=latin for cool log=latin for word/speech.. so would mean , cool poem

phillaud phil/laud- phil= greek for love, laud=latin for praise ... so would mean , i both love and praise it

satpsych sat/psych - sat= latin for to please, psych= greek for mind,soul, spirit,, so would be,  this is pleasing to me down to my very being...

so if you liked it---------friglog
   if you loved it---------phillaud
   really really love it-- satpsych



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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21 posted 2000-11-07 09:17 PM


so if you liked it---------friglog
   if you loved it---------phillaud
   really really love it-- satpsych


Ye Gods! The man has thought about it!!
I feel ashamed...my shume just doesn't look good anymore (not that it ever did)...

Right - you're on...please expect these words to appear on your posts - because they will be from this moment on!

LOL - good one J...

you redeeming thing!

Hey - redeeming is pretty cool..

'this poem has many redeeming features'

K

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22 posted 2000-11-07 09:22 PM


satpsych!!




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23 posted 2000-11-07 10:53 PM


severn,  Thank-you, you are very gnathonic to tell me so!

I just want you all to know that I love coming to this phrontistery, since like you, I am of the scribacious sort.
The only concern that I have is that I may be developing limophotios if I keep this up much longer!  

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24 posted 2000-11-07 11:11 PM


More words ala Jamie...

who 'forgot' to write them down while putting them together over ICQ

Now:

I don't have the fancy origins...but they all spring from Latin and whatnot...

Vervac = empty of truth (sheesh - I can see this being used a lot
Vidvitvoc = [the poem/story] gives voice and vision to life
Senssoph = full of wisdom

I totally phillaud these...

Cheers J!

K



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25 posted 2000-11-08 06:59 AM


I am completely guilty of the overuse of AWESOME... but then I use it equally as much in conversation... believe it or not, my verbiage here is synonymous with my everyday conversation... I'm a total pain in the butt to hang out with.... Ask my kids - They carry a dictionary around with them... and only visit on Sundays....and then only for a couple of hours in the afternoon....

I don't know about here on the forums, but if I have to correct another essay that says "I liked this book SO much, because..... I'm taking the word "so" out of the dictionary... officially...

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26 posted 2000-11-08 09:21 AM


I like the phrase 'repliers block'..that's where I am now..if a poem or story doesn't touch me personally, what can I say? I think that is why these 'new words' are so cool!!    
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27 posted 2000-11-08 10:44 AM


For anyone interested in unusual words, there is a great web site called,

Forthright's Phrontistery
International House of Logorrhea
http://www.freespeech.org/forthright/

I think it is a eellogofusciouhipoppokunurious - (good)
place to add new words to your vocabulary!
  

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28 posted 2000-11-08 11:07 AM


This is really senssoph!!!!

I like the idea of "replier's block". . . maybe we could make our replies look like form letters. . .

Dear (name of poet)
Thank you for submitting your work to (name of forum) Forum here at PiP Talk Forums.

We have found your submission to be (insert overused word here) and applaud your use of (insert poetic function here)

Thank you for posting. . .

Sincerely,
(name of person replying)

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29 posted 2000-11-10 02:05 PM


Hey. . . any other ideas???

Let's not stop now!!!

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--Victor Frankl


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30 posted 2000-11-10 06:42 PM


Let's skip new words and go for something tried and true.....honesty!
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31 posted 2000-11-11 01:57 AM


Ouch.

Look - I tried that with Jamie.
He sulked.

Cheers for the link Debbie...

Seriously, honesty would be good...I loathe gush - there's an honest statement.

K

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32 posted 2000-11-12 04:20 PM


I hate to say it, but :
Passion....

and dreams
tender
breath
dawn
stars
destiny
and I'm guilty, guilty!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



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33 posted 2000-11-13 10:44 AM


Is this not all so BEAUTIFUL to simply suggest that there are so many VERY BEAUTIFUL people, and to think that I might actually want to say these words that THIS IS a VERY BEAUTIFUL place, VERY PASSIONATE, VERY LOVELY, VERY EXOTIC, AND VERY, VERY BRILLIANT (of course that was reserved for Janet and so were all synonyms of BEAUTIFUL for Liz) and so on and so forth...

and then Jamie decided to SULK into his crater of volcanic thoughts, thinking up of strange adjectives to use with Chris and Kamla and they come up with such abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz words like such a RIFF-RAFF poetry, talking of PIRATES (read poets) in love (read bluff) and of the rest in HATE (read indifferent state).... and blah blah

all this when all I wanted to say is I LOVE THIS PLACE....

... all I need is some AWESOME uplifting (and ABSOLUTELY no pun intended)...

(now where were we again???   )

hmmmm..... you know what I'm saying??? ... forget about it.... (remember Mr. Brasco)

regards,
sudhir

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34 posted 2000-11-14 07:28 PM


Honesty?????

Come on deVine. . . are you sure that you want to do that???      

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35 posted 2000-11-14 07:50 PM


Right... Honesty is not always the best policy...
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36 posted 2000-11-14 09:31 PM


I want a nickel for every time any form of the word Passion has ever been used..!!!... on these forums and/or the old blue pages...
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37 posted 2000-11-19 12:17 PM


What a gathering of neologists !

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38 posted 2000-11-25 05:15 PM


overused words:

heart
soul
spirit
angel



- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



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39 posted 2000-11-25 09:05 PM


I like the word hystericalarious--a combination of hysterical and hilarious...not too good though, but oh well.

Elizabeth

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40 posted 2001-05-11 10:15 AM


Have I told you lately that I satpsych you?

heh

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41 posted 2001-05-11 03:02 PM


How much time do you have?    
Oh boy, let me have a stab at this again
(and I've been guilty)
in a poem
these are so vague they've almost lost their meaning:

dream
fantasy
destiny
beauty
soul
sweet
heart
precious
heartache
desire
angels
adore
fate
vision
rainbow

in a reply:

wink
smooch
wonderful
beautiful
loved it
bump
  
every poet needs a good Thesaurus and Dictionary.....
an absolute must if you want to write something original right?

that's about it for now, love this thread!!! it's awesome!!!!!


Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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42 posted 2001-05-11 03:19 PM


Beautimos: beau-ti-mos (byu-tea-muss)- A melding of beautiful and most, enabling the user to use one word to say something is the most beautiful thing they have seen.
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43 posted 2001-05-11 06:57 PM


J - I think you have...maybe you need to say it...just...a feeeeeeeeeeeew more times heh.

~blush~

Wondereme A word comprised of wonderful and supreme..meaning the most wonderful thing I know.

K ~satpsych~


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Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
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44 posted 2001-05-11 07:02 PM


And Kathleen...I nearly have a shrine for my thesaurus and dictionary lol...

K

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45 posted 2001-05-16 01:43 AM


Chris uses "Mountain Dew" too often..
Yeah, have to agree that 'beautiful' is so common!!
-wow
-nice
-well done

And I have almost said all of the overused words u guys have mentioned, once or twice.. =P
Except not Mountain Dew.. 'til now..
-Lynne

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46 posted 2001-05-16 04:36 AM


test
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47 posted 2001-05-16 02:48 PM


It's not the strength of yarn we use
or whether it's mundane
it's what we weave that in the end will
show our final grade

For words like salivating, servitude
and dispensation rolls
if woven on a broken loom
it comes out as... well... Doggerel


I guess I get an F for that.. Huh? lol

killed my Buddha, killed my Christ
Killed my karma, paid the price

For 27 years I've carried the welt
Wie kleine ist deinige Welt?

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48 posted 2001-05-16 08:18 PM


K, are you trying to ban the word 'test'?
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49 posted 2001-05-20 10:36 PM


er Liz...heh...having probs with my browser...so I kinda experimented here and well - forgot to delete it HAHAHA...

HAHAHAH

K

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50 posted 2001-06-05 06:37 PM


beauty,
purity,
Frozen,
petals, Opiate (i over use this word far too much)
blue sky
love
passion

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