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Brad
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since 1999-08-20
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Jejudo, South Korea

0 posted 2000-05-20 10:12 PM


I stole this from Charles Bernstein's web page. I don't think he'll mind:  

EXPERIMENTS

1. Homolinguistic translation: Take a poem (someone else's then your own) and translate it "English to
English" by substituting word for word, phrase for phrase, line for line, or "free" translation as
response to each phrase or sentence. (Cf.: Six Fillious by bp nichol, Steve McCaffery, Robert Fillious,
George Brecht, Dick Higgins, Dieter Roth.)

2. Homophonic translation: Take a poem in a foreign language that you can pronounce but not
necessarily understand and translate the sound of the poem into English (i.e. French "blanc" to blank
or "toute" to toot). (Cf.: Louis and Celia Zukofsky's Catullus.) (Rewrite to suit?)

3. Lexical translation: Take a poem in a foreign language that you can pronounce but not necessarily
understand and translate it word for word with the help of a bilingual dictionary. (Rewrite to suit?)

4. Acrostic Chance. Pick a book at random and use title as acrostic key phrase. For each letter of key
phrase go to page number in book that corresponds (a=1, z=26) and copy as first line of poem from the
first word that begins with that letter to end of line or sentence. Continue through all key letters,
leaving stanza breaks to mark each new key word. (Cf.: Jackson Mac Low's Stanzas for Iris Lezak.)
Variations include using author's name as code for reading through her or his work, using your own or
friend's name, picking different kinds of books for this process, devising alternative acrostic
procedures.

5. Tzara's hat. Everyone is a group writes down a word (alternative: phrase, line) and puts it in a hat.
Poem is made according to order it is randomly pulled from hat. (Solo: pick a series of words or lines
from book, newspapers, magazines to put in the hat.)

7. Burrough's Fold¡©in: Take two different pages from a newspaper or magazine article, or a book, and
cut the pages in half vertically. Paste the mismatched pages together. (Cf.: William Burrough's The
Third Mind.)

8. Write a poem with words cut somewhere in the middle and recombined with the beginning parts
following the ending parts.

9. General cut¡©ups: Write a poem composed entirely of phrases lifted from other sources. Use one
source for a poem and then many; try different types of sources: literary, historical, magazines,
advertisements, manuals, dictionaries, instructions, travelogues, etc.

10. Cento: write a collage made up of full¡©lined of selected source poems.

11. Substitution (1): "Mad libs". Take a poem (or other source text) and put blanks in place of three or
four words in each line, noting the part of speech under each blank. Fill in the blanks being sure not to
recall the original context.

12. Substitution (2): "7 up or down". Take a poem or other, possibly well¡©known, text and substitute
another word for every noun, adjective, adverb, and verb; determine the substitute word by looking up
the index work in the dictionary and going 7 up or down, or one more, until you get a syntactically
suitable replacement. (Cf.: Clark Coolidge and Larry Fagin, On the Pumice of Morons.)

13. Substitution (3): "Find and replace". Systematically replace one word in a source text with another
word or string of words. Perform this operation serially with the same source text, increasing the
number of words in the replace string.

14. Serial sentences: Select one sentence each from a variety of different books or other sources. Add
sentences of your own composition. Combine into one paragraph, reordering to produce the most
interesting results.

16. Alphabet poems: make up a poem of 26 words so that each word begins with the next letter of the
alphabet. Write another alphabet poem but scramble the letter order.

17. Alliteration (assonance): write a poem in which all the words in each line begin with the same
letter.

18. Doubling: Starting with one sentence, write a series of paragraphs each doubling the number of
sentences in the previous paragraph and including all the words used previously. [Cf.: Ron Silliman's
Ketjak]

19. Collaboration: Write poems with one or more other people: alternating lines (chaining or renga),
writing simultaneously and collaging, rewriting, editing, supplementing the previous version. This can
be done in person, via e¡©mail, or through "snail" mail.

20. Group sonnet: 14 people each write one ten-word line (or alternate measure) on an index card.
Order to suit.

21. Write a poem trying to transcribe as accurately as you can your thoughts while you are writing.
Don't edit anything out. Write as fast as you can without planning what you are going to say.

22. Dream work: Write down your dreams as the first thing you do every morning for 30 days. Apply
translation and aleatoric processes to this material. Double the length of each dream. Weave them
together into one poem, adding or changing or reordering material. Negate or reverse all statements (I
went down the hill to I went up the hill, I didn't to I did). Borrow a friend's dreams and apply these
techniques to them.

23. Write a poem made up entirely of neologism or nonsense words or fragments of words. [Cf.: Lewis
Carroll's "Jabberwocky", Khlebnikov's zaum, P. Inman's Platin, David Melnick's Pcoet.]

24. Write a poem with each line filling in the blanks of "I used to be --¡© but now I am ---¡©". (I used to
write poems, but now I just do experiments; I used to make sense, but now I just make poems.)

25. Write a poem consisting entirely of things you'd like to say, but never would, to parent, lover,
sibling, child, teacher, roommate, best friend, mayor, president, corporate CEO, etc.

26. Write a poem consisting entirely of overheard conversation.

27. Nonliterary forms: Write a poem in the form of an index, a table of contents, a resume, an
advertisement for an imaginary or real product, an instruction manual, a travel guide, a quiz or
examination, etc.

28. Imitation: Write a poem in the style of each of a dozen poets who you like and dislike: try to make it
as close to a forgery of an "unknown" poem of the author as possible.

29. Write a poem without mentioning any objects.

30. Backwards: Reverse or alter the line sequence of a poem of your own or someone else's. Reverse the
word order. Rather than reverse, scramble.

31. Write an autobiographical poems without using any pronouns.

32. Attention: Write down everything you hear for one hour.

33. Brainard's Memory: Write a poem all of whose lines start "I remember ..." (Cf.: Joe Brainard's I
Remember.)

34. "Pits": Write the worst possible poem you can imagine.

35. Counting: Write poems that conform to various numeric patterns for number of words in a line or
sentence, number of lines in a stanza or paragraph, number of stanzas or paragraphs in a work.
Alternately, count letters or syllables. Use complex numeric series or simpler fixed-number patterns.

36. Write a poem just when you are on the verge of falling asleep. Write a line a day as you are falling
asleep or waking up. (Cf.: Ron Silliman's R.)

38. [Removed for further study]

39. List poem: write a poem consisting of favorite words or phrases collected over a period of time;
pick your favorite words from a particular book.

40. List poem 2: write a poem consisting entirely of a list of "things", either homogenous or
heterogeneous (common lists included shopping lists, things to do, lists of flowers or rocks, lists of
colors, inventory lists, lists of events, lists of names, ...).

41. Chronology: make up a list of dates with associated events, real or imagined.

42. Transcription: Tape a phone or live conversation between yourself and a friend. Make a poem
composed entirely of transcribed parts.

43. Canceling: Write a series of lines or rhymes such that every other one cancels the one before ("I
come before you / to stand behind you").

44. Erasure: Take a poem of your own or someone else's and crossout most of the words on each poem,
retype what remains as your poem. [Cf.: Ronald Johnson's RADI OS from Milton.]

45. Write a series of ten poems going from one to ten words in each poem. Reorder.

46. Write a poem composed entirely of questions.

48. Write a poem made up entirely of directions.

49. Write a poem consisting only of opening lines (improvise your own lines, then use source texts).

50. Write a poem consisting only of prepositions, then of prepositions and one other part of speech.

51. Write a series of eight¡©word lines consisting of one each of each part of speech.

52. Write poems consisting of one¡©word lines; write a poems consisting of two¡©word lines; write a
poems consisting of three¡©word lines.

53. Synchronicity: Write a poem in which all the events occur simultaneously.

54. Diachronicity: Write a poem in which all the events occur indifferent places and at different times.

55. Visual poetry: write poems with strong visual or "concrete" elements - including combination of
lexical and nonlexical (pictorial) elements. Play with alphabets and typography, placement of words on
the page, etc.

56. Write a series of poems or stanzas while listening to music; change type of music for each stanza or
poem.

57. Elimination: cut out the second half of sentences.

58. Excuses list: write a poem made up entirely of excuses.

59. Sprung Diary: write a diary tracking and intercutting multiple levels of thoughts, experiences,
anticipations, expectations, from minute to major. (Cf.. Hannah Weiner's Clairvoyant Journal.)

61. Make up more experiments.

Remember: Poems can be in prose format!

Rewrite and recombine, collage, splice together the material generated from these experiments into one
long ongoing poem!

- Compiled by Charles Bernstein from Bernadette Mayer & workshop's Experiments list, and various
other sources. (C) 1996 by Poets' Ludicrously Aimless Yearning (PLAY). Dispense only as appropriate
and under the supervision of an attending reader. Individual experiments are not liable for injury or
failure resulting from improper use of appliance. Any profits accrued as a direct or indirect result of
the use of these formulas shall be redistributed to the language at large. Management assumes no
responsibility for damages that may result consequent to the use of this material in educational
institutions or individual writing projects

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-05-21 12:47 PM


Or how about writing a poem using the poem titles in Open 7?
Nan
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2 posted 2000-05-21 09:29 AM


I wanna know what #38 is.... Maybe it could be a "writer's choice" or something like that...
Poertree
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
3 posted 2000-05-21 05:12 PM


HEH HEH ......

Good one Brad ...I knew i was right to side with you ... lol

...... jenni ?????? ~grin~

P

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 2000-05-22 05:23 AM


# 31 - I like that...I think I may have done that once actually...but it probably wasn't very good - lol!

And that # 38 is just a tease!

K

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