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rainchild
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-04-17 11:54 AM


I wrote this for my 18 year old son.

            True Wisdom

Don't turn that page, you can't go back,
the story can't be changed!
Once innocents is given up, your past can't
be rearranged.
God planned this gift for your lifes mate,
love isn't made it's done.
The person who receives this gift
should be your only one.
This wisdom that I offer you , today might sound outdated.
But when you start paying child support,
you'll wish that you had waited!


© Copyright 2000 rainchild - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-04-17 03:07 PM


Outdated or not, wisdom is wisdom and hopefully your son will benefit from his mother's Love and guidance.
Enjoyed reading this poem.  A good message for all youth to discover.

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