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Gray Dawn (Haiku)

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INclan
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0 posted 04-17-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for INclan

gray dawn on Spring grass
black cows repose chewing cud
drizzle washes all
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OK,let's see, lesson for the day is...if I study INclan's work close enough, I might get it!

Well done - and as this is a theme close to my heart, I can say you painted the picture quite well...
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2 posted 04-17-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

INclan~
Nicely done.
Very picturesque.

Aren't these just the most
fantastic fun to have pop into
your mind?
I'm fascinated with them also.
~*Marge*~


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INclan
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Sunshine, I am flattered that someone with your posting experience would study me.  Thank you for your gracious response.

Marge, They are indeed fun.  I was commuting up to work, in Culver, and came upon that scene near Kewanna. I really enjoy the syllable limitations of Haiku.  It forces me to say exactly what I want without ANY wasted words.  Thank you for responding.

INclan
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Delightful,INclan ")
 
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