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Spring is amiss

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TheBlindMan
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Itís April and Spring is in the air
But something is amiss
something doesnít just quite fit
I wonder, could it be this

While nature brings new life forth
and the sun it warms the heart
I can not seem to find the words
to end this being apart

While plants and flowers begin to grow
and buds begin to sprout
I pray to God and ask to know
what this is all about

Why have I lost the only one
that gave my life such glee
Why is the heart that is my sun
now closed and taken from me

I know the blame is mine to keep
to accept and understand
but can I forge a hill so steep
without your helping hand

though you have pulled away from me
and given your heart away
I beg your forgiveness and plead to you
just to hear me say

While others may fulfill your needs
and ease your caring soul
you hold within your very hand
a passion to unfold

for if you were to take the risk
and give me one last chance
our love would live forever
and forever we would dance
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1 posted 04-17-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Why have I lost the only one
that gave my life such glee
Why is the heart that is my sun
now closed and taken from me

I know the blame is mine to keep
to accept and understand
but can I forge a hill so steep
without your helping hand

though you have pulled away from me
and given your heart away
I beg your forgiveness and plead to you
just to hear me say

While others may fulfill your needs
and ease your caring soul
you hold within your very hand
a passion to unfold

for if you were to take the risk
and give me one last chance
our love would live forever
and forever we would dance

*************************

This hits very close to home, but time does ease the pain. so keep your head up an move on

Jeffrey
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


2 posted 04-17-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nice writing BlindMan.  Real good job with the rhyme.
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


3 posted 04-17-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Touching with feelings deep.  Well written.
And, of course, the nurturing nature,
that I have been blessed (or is it cursed)
wants to hug you and tell you all this
kind of pain does pass.

netswan
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