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Sven
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0 posted 04-16-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Sing me your song, gentle voice
Let your melismatic cascade of notes
Fill my ears with the song of your love
A song long unsung, just newly discovered
Sung in a new voice, for you, for me

Sing me your song, gentle spirit
Let each phrase tell of a love of life
Fill my mind with the memory of your love
Of memories just found, and yet to be found
Told in a new way, for us

Sing me your song, tender heart
Let your harmonies caress the recesses of my soul
Fill my life with the promise of love to come
Of a love that will transcend the page
And become a masterpiece of art, and of love

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1 posted 04-16-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Sven,
How do you keep coming up with such beautiful
pieces? I am truly in awe of your romanticism.

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-17-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

He comes up with beautiful romantic poems because he's a beautifully romantic person!!!  
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3 posted 04-17-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven,
Nice poem.  Beautiful words.  Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately.  Very interesting choice of words throughout.  Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman...
Great poem.


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Sven,
Nice poem.  Beautiful words.  Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately.  Very interesting choice of words throughout.  Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman...
Great poem.


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--Michael W. Smith
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Painter,poet,born romantic,owner of a white horse and knights outfit,......need I go on.
Another display of one of your endless talents my friend!  Beautiful.

Marina


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Sven~
So lovely.
Got my little heart going pitty-pat !
You are a master at the romance.
~*Marge*~


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