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My Mess

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Kaiyu
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since 04-16-2000
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0 posted 04-16-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Kaiyu   Email Kaiyu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaiyu


My Mess


This house is chaotic
yet, here I sit to write
it’s nauseating and sick
to look at; what a sight

Nothing is where it should
be so much clutter to sift
through, I know a sure
remedy, but its not the
to do!

The mere thought has got
me pooped!

Before I even begin, why
this big mess has me duped,
is because “I” brought it
in!!!!

I created this total bedlam
without too much assistance
I could really use a hand

As I take a better glance
I doubt I’d find a cheerful
lass, once she sees this sorry
mess

I can’t really bring myself to
ask, so it’s just “myself,” I guess
now, to get me self off my rear
to making headway around
here

The “dilemma” for today had
better be solved without delay
Time’s awastin’ as I sit and
soon I’ll be in a heap of ****


By,  Kaiyu


© Copyright 2000 Kaiyu - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 04-16-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

rotflmao  hahahha --
Well, you are fabulous - Kaiyu. Such a
talent to write surrounded by a mess.

Oh you will find your lass who will clean
up your mess - Just write her beautiful
poems and she just may try her best.

Thanks for sharing, Enjoyed

netswan

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2 posted 04-16-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I hate to admit this but I can totally relate...lol
Great poem

Jeffrey
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


3 posted 04-17-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Kaiyu,

Oh my dear I've seen this mess you speak of and yes "YOU have a MESS" but my love I am the cheerful lass that will help you solve your dilemma and when were done cleaning up your**** will get back to what we love and that is our passion in poetry.

I do so welcome you my friend,

Cerenity

To anyone who reads this, Kaiyu is a dear friend of mine, who I have encouraged to post her work here at passions.
 
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