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Kaiyu
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since 2000-04-16
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0 posted 2000-04-16 10:34 PM



Life Is Good


When troubles greet you at the door
and it eats at you right to the core
life is good

When someone is being loud and rude
you get offended and really stewed
life is good

When children push your buttons to the max,
and you get so flustered you can’t relax
life is good

When Murphy’s Law gets in your face
and you can’t seem to find your space
life is good

It takes an ounce of bad to appreciate
a pound of good so, when there’s not a
cent left in your purse
just remember this:

“IT COULD BE WORSE”

Life IS oh so good!  


By, Kaiyu    


© Copyright 2000 Kaiyu - All Rights Reserved
WhiteNite
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 241
Montgomery, AL
1 posted 2000-04-16 10:36 PM


[G] Oh so true.. it could always be worse... and what good does it ever do to complain? =)  Welcome to Passions.  Nice poem

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)


Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2000-04-16 10:38 PM


Welcome to passions....very well delivered poem

Jeffrey

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
3 posted 2000-04-16 10:47 PM


Welcome to Passions Kaiyu. Great optimistic
poem, delivered with great poetic style.
Thanks for Sharing

netswan

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-17 12:41 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kaiyu! Wise words here! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
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5 posted 2000-04-17 08:25 AM


Kaiyu,

Welcome to Passions.  A wonderful first post! You understand, we will now be expecting great things from you.  I look forward to reading more of your work.

INclan

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
6 posted 2000-04-17 10:10 AM


Life may not always be fair, but "it is good"!
Well said!!!
Welcome to Passions!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-04-17 08:20 PM


Hi Kaiyu,

Hey sweetie life is good because I have you for a friend, but sweetie this poem is great.

Love,  Cerenity

Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
8 posted 2000-04-17 08:32 PM


Kaiyu!
Life is good , this is my filosofy of life!
Wonderful first post!
I'm definatelly gonna read your next poem!


 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society

kaile
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singapore
9 posted 2000-04-20 11:15 AM


Welcome to Passions,kaiyu...lovely first post...like the optimistic,positive tone in this one

i will post a haiku especially for you in Open Poetry#7 ")

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
10 posted 2000-04-21 04:08 PM


Welcome to Passions,Kaiyu  
Wonderful piece here .....

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

Lady Web
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 96
Houston, Texas
11 posted 2000-04-21 06:30 PM



Wow life must be really good for you to


write this poem, what inspiration you
have given to us. Keep it up!


 

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-06-06 07:00 PM


yep
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