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Rendezvous

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CMGrimm
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0 posted 04-16-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CMGrimm

I watched her
flowing long lines
and cascading hair
slightly blowing
in the gentle breeze
as she approached me
from across the parking lot.

I felt her warmth
as we embraced
and a stirring in
my soul
as she whispered
"I've missed you"
in my ear.

I took her
by the hand
and led her
up the flight of stairs
into my room.
I turned on the lamp
next to the bed.

I caught a glimpse of her
in the mirror over my bureau.

I realized
that in a few moments
I would be making love
to a woman
that I could never really
make love to.

Christopher M. Grimm




 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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netswan
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1 posted 04-16-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

So sad -- and such a pretty soul warming
poem - thanks for sharing --
Other than that, I am speechless --)

netswan
CMGrimm
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2 posted 04-17-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Netswan...apparently so was everyone else...lol

chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 04-18-2000 06:24 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

this was beautiful!
CMGrimm
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4 posted 04-18-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

thanks netswan...glad you could enjoy...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Pepper
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5 posted 04-21-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautiful work here, CM .. I like the twist you took in the last stanza ..
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