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Side Walk By The Tree |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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There is a black bird with just one wing. He used to walk to my house and sing. I can't help but hear those songs again. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Welcome to Passions, my friend! This is beautiful - so much feeling in so few lines! It takes me back to a loving sorrowful place of memory ... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you so much, i will be sure to read your poetry, i am so pleased to have found such a constructive place to write, thank you again, redheart angrybraids |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi there and welcome!!  This is a beautiful little poem you have here. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
I thought it wasn't possible to resume so many feelings in so few lines! great work , wonderful first post!! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Redheart! Welcome to Passions. What an amazing poem. - Short, sweet and to the point. Lovely netswan |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
Thank ya'll so much, I hope the input is this good when I start writing more incomprehendible poems. Please say how you really feel, I'm open to cuntructive criticism. Thank you all for posting and replying, I will be sure to post at your poems as well. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ And into our hearts you walked this day~ Please return to the nest ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your poem Redheart...James |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very clearly set scene, very clearly stated emotions and all these in a few lines, i liked!(since i have a soft spot for short poems)  please post more often, redheart... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you all kindly, i wrote this poem so long ago, it resembles by dad, the crow fellow that he is. Kindly, |
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