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Side Walk By The Tree

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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 04-16-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redheart angrybraids

There is a black bird
with just one wing.
He used to walk
to my house
and sing.
I can't help
but hear those
songs again.
© Copyright 2000 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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1 posted 04-16-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Welcome to Passions, my friend!  This is beautiful - so much feeling in so few lines!  It takes me back to a loving sorrowful place of memory ...

redheart angrybraids
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2 posted 04-16-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

thank you so much,
i will be sure to read your poetry, i am so pleased to have found such a constructive place to write,
thank you again,
redheart angrybraids
Temptress
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3 posted 04-16-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Hi there and welcome!!   This is a beautiful little poem you have here.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
Lone Ranger
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4 posted 04-16-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

I thought it wasn't possible to resume so many feelings in so few lines!
great work , wonderful first post!!

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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5 posted 04-16-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Redheart! Welcome to Passions.
What an amazing poem. - Short, sweet
and to the point. Lovely

netswan
redheart angrybraids
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6 posted 04-16-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

Thank ya'll so much,
I hope the input is this good
when I start writing more
incomprehendible poems.
Please say how you really feel,
I'm open to cuntructive criticism.
Thank you all for posting and replying, I  will be sure to post at your poems as well.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 02-17-2001 05:26 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RedHeartAngryBraids~
And into our hearts you walked this day~
Please return to the nest ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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8 posted 07-30-2001 03:02 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed your poem Redheart...James
kaile
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9 posted 08-03-2001 11:25 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

very clearly set scene, very clearly stated emotions

and all these in a few lines, i liked!(since i have a soft spot for short poems)

please post more often, redheart...
redheart angrybraids
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10 posted 08-11-2001 04:33 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

thank you all kindly,
i wrote this poem so long ago,
it resembles by dad,
the crow fellow that he is.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

 
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