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~The Perfect Hug~

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devina
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0 posted 04-16-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

The perfect hug, starts with two-
Warm flesh meets in common need-
Desire at its all-highest degree…

Tender limbs entwine with love-
Seeking solace from the storm-
As bodies mesh, comfort adorns…

Sweet breath upon a lovers ear-
Makes weeping seem worthwhile-
Inhale the fragrance, tis versatile…

Completeness, now being one-
As fury subsides, tears dry-
No more hurt to justify…

The perfect hug-
Is made
With love…




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-16-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Lovely poem. Especially the ending.

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-16-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Coudn't agree more..   

I think there should be a national HUG day!!!

HUGS
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3 posted 04-16-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
You are just a 'love-child'.
I love that in you.
*HUGS* abound for everyone !
Love your outlook.
KARMA  
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 04-16-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is SO sweet and pretty to read D,
a perfect poem describing the perfect hug...
PERFECT  
what more could we ask for...other than the HUG!!*smile*
loved the sweet breath and fragrance part.
mmmmmmm lol
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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5 posted 04-16-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for GAngel2212   Email GAngel2212   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GAngel2212

That was a wonderful poem. i enjoyed it very much! Keep up the great work!!!

~GAngel2212~
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6 posted 04-16-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

yes. . .this is wonderful Devina. . . perfect!

"Sweet breath upon a lovers ear-
Makes weeping seem worthwhile-
Inhale the fragrance, tis versatile… "

I love this line. . .

Excellent, my friend. . .

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--Victor Frankl

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7 posted 04-16-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this one.....gimme one of them hugs!!  
devina
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Jeffrey- thank you!!!

RainbowGirl-Me thinks we all need good hugs from time to time!!! I couldn't agree with you more!!

Marge- You keep looking out for me and my karma, and I'll spread the hugs around!!! Thanks for all my dear!! Love ya!!!

JM- thank you for the "perfect"...I humbly thank you!!!

GAngel- thank you...I hope you're enjoying your stay here in the family!!!

Sven- For all you've done dear...you deserve the biggest hug of all!!!

Sharon-Er..hun...I was meaning one of those intimate hugs...but I'll send you a man with one soon- I promise!! ROFL Here's a nice friendly hug for you girl!!! (hug) Thank you!!!



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Michael
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9 posted 04-17-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, I'm certainly not a fan of "perfection" but ((Hugs)) anyway.


Michael
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This is a lovely poem...those hugs sound good!! Can I have a friendly one like the one you gave Sharon?!?

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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11 posted 04-17-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Perfection is another matter altogether Michael, but there's always been the PERFECT HUG!!!  

ESP- I'm full of hugs these days girl...
((((HUGS))))))


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Danny Holloway
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Personally, i like long hugs, not the short "grab and let go" type. and then, when you throw in love, you have record breaking hugs.  
Nice design with this poem.
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Hugs have lots of power..especially if its with someone special.  James
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