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~The Perfect Hug~
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~The Perfect Hug~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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The perfect hug, starts with two- Warm flesh meets in common need- Desire at its all-highest degree… Tender limbs entwine with love- Seeking solace from the storm- As bodies mesh, comfort adorns… Sweet breath upon a lovers ear- Makes weeping seem worthwhile- Inhale the fragrance, tis versatile… Completeness, now being one- As fury subsides, tears dry- No more hurt to justify… The perfect hug- Is made With love… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lovely poem. Especially the ending. Jeffrey |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Coudn't agree more..  I think there should be a national HUG day!!! HUGS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ You are just a 'love-child'. I love that in you. *HUGS* abound for everyone ! Love your outlook. KARMA ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is SO sweet and pretty to read D, a perfect poem describing the perfect hug... PERFECT  what more could we ask for...other than the HUG!!*smile* loved the sweet breath and fragrance part. mmmmmmm lol take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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GAngel2212 Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 21 |
That was a wonderful poem. i enjoyed it very much! Keep up the great work!!! ~GAngel2212~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . .this is wonderful Devina. . . perfect! "Sweet breath upon a lovers ear- Makes weeping seem worthwhile- Inhale the fragrance, tis versatile… " I love this line. . . Excellent, my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one.....gimme one of them hugs!!  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Jeffrey- thank you!!! RainbowGirl-Me thinks we all need good hugs from time to time!!! I couldn't agree with you more!! Marge- You keep looking out for me and my karma, and I'll spread the hugs around!!! Thanks for all my dear!! Love ya!!! JM- thank you for the "perfect"...I humbly thank you!!! GAngel- thank you...I hope you're enjoying your stay here in the family!!! Sven- For all you've done dear...you deserve the biggest hug of all!!! Sharon-Er..hun...I was meaning one of those intimate hugs...but I'll send you a man with one soon- I promise!! ROFL Here's a nice friendly hug for you girl!!! (hug) Thank you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I'm certainly not a fan of "perfection" but ((Hugs)) anyway. Michael |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem...those hugs sound good!! Can I have a friendly one like the one you gave Sharon?!? Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Perfection is another matter altogether Michael, but there's always been the PERFECT HUG!!! ESP- I'm full of hugs these days girl... ((((HUGS)))))) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Personally, i like long hugs, not the short "grab and let go" type. and then, when you throw in love, you have record breaking hugs. Nice design with this poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hugs have lots of power..especially if its with someone special. James |
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