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Happiness

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Lone Ranger
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                Happiness

I need to tell you
So you can understand
In the way I feel for you
You're more than just a friend

I only asked for friendship
And you taught me what to do
But I guess I made a mistake
As I fell in love with you

From the first time I saw you
I guess my heart had melt
And as we became closer friends
You understood the way it felt

After all I have done
There's only one thing to regret
I should have kept on fighting for you
Instead of giving up like that

Happiness is a word
Made of nine letters , that's true
But mine resumes to only three
You...
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1 posted 04-16-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneRanger~
How filled with longing and regret
this is.  So very sweetly you've
phrased it.
Sometimes ... it doesn't have
the ending we want ... but that doesn't
keep it out of our memories.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~



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hsystems
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2 posted 04-16-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

"Who was that masked man?"
"I don't know - but he left us this Sterling-Silver poem!"
Excellent work!  This is profoundly beautiful, and it touched me deeply.  Thank you so much for sharing, and welcome to Passions!

  
Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
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Lone Ranger
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Marge , you're absolutely right , this poem is filled with regret , and I'm glad that you could see that!
Thanks Hsystems , but to tell the truth
I don't feel like I'm a masked man at all...
 
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