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tulip
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0 posted 04-16-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

Is it possible,
to love you at first?
To feel all the flutters
of the butterflies curse?

To see you, and crumble,
to melt in your sight?
To miss you so intenslely
and shutter at night?

You strutted right in,
and sat next to me.
You held me so tightly,
I couldn't quite see.

I lost all my boldness,
and quite contently,
I started to fumble
you started to flee.

I thought if I let you,
you'd come back to me.
It happened so quickly,
it just couldn't be.

I lost the contentment
of having you there.
I know that the moments
were special we shared.

I'm letting you go now,
but I'm hoping you'll see,
that the moments we've shared,
are locked deep within me.


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 04-16-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

nice flow tulips and the subject matter brought a smile yuhuyuhuyuhy thanky

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2 posted 04-16-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Tulip, simply lovely and heart felt.

Thanks for sharing.

netswan
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3 posted 04-16-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

wayoutwalt,
I'm glad I was able to make you smile!
netswan,
Thanks for reading, I appreciate the response!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 04-16-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I was sitting with my favorite lady friend at lunch yesterday and I was thinking that I couldn't make her love me and she couldn't make me love her but I knew that it was happening to me and I wondered if it was happening to her.   James
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5 posted 04-16-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tulip~
This is such a pretty piece.
Sadly spoken ... but lovely.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 04-17-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

jm,
Ohhh, the feelings that fly in the beginning of a relationship!!!  Wouldn't it be wonderful if those feelings could stay alive the rest of our lives?
Marge,
Thank you!
 
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