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First__Knight
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0 posted 2000-04-16 04:12 AM


Desires Unyielding
~First Knight~

As you stood
facing the wall,
where the milky
white of your skin
blended so well.

I pressing ever so close
to keep you pinned.
A soft sigh deep in your ear.
Long strands of your hair
draped down your back.

Pressure building as
I pull at your waist
pulling you ever so close
to my own.

Shallow of breath,
a skip in the beat.
Passion without words,
bodies in heat.

A soft caress upon the neck,
a gentle nip on the shoulder.
None surpass your beauty,
and no other I can see.

A hand that turns your head,
with a tugging of your hair.
A warm and solid kiss,
as the room begins it's spin.

There is no place
I would rather be
than here within your grasp.

So hold me here my darling,
While I learn to catch my breath.


 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2000-04-16 04:26 AM


Yep...shew..sure is hot and romantic in here!!! by the way I liked your signature statement!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-04-16 04:28 AM


oman oman oman very nice  

 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
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3 posted 2000-04-16 05:35 AM


Whew First_Knight it is hot in here!
Gorgeous poem. Thanks for sharing.  I am
growing my hair long now --)

netswan

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-04-16 05:55 AM


First Knight you really did a good job with this one..so sensual and warm...is this a true story? ha...ha...James
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-04-16 02:17 PM


David~
How pleased I am to see you.
This is simply stunning.
You made it soar off the page.
Beautiful, sir.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-04-16 02:29 PM


Wow.....this is HOT!!!  Excellent writing!!!  What more can I say??  Oh yes!!!  Keep it coming!!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2000-04-16 04:14 PM


Beautiful imagery, Sir!!  
First__Knight
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8 posted 2000-04-16 09:23 PM


Oh thank you all so much for the kind replies  

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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9 posted 2000-04-16 10:27 PM


Goodness! I felt that!

 Kathleen


First__Knight
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10 posted 2000-04-17 08:37 AM


I am glad you did Irish  

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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11 posted 2000-04-17 11:34 AM


Whew...I think the temperature went up about 20 degrees in here. OH MAN!!! What a poem  
First__Knight
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12 posted 2000-04-18 06:33 AM


Hehe....your always hot Ruth dear....

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



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