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Unknown Love

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Unknown Love


I think love is a feeling that surpasses all other feelings,
Love is the rare sensation one feels when their good emotions become them.
Love is when you lay on your bed at night,
And feel like your heart is going to explode because you canít stop thinking about the one you love.
When you look into their eyes and you see nothing but perfection.
You see nothing but all the good qualities about them
Love is when you feel the pain that they are going through,
And you feel the pain they are not going through.
You know youíre in love when you hold there hand,
And youíre heart races with joy.
You close your eyes and visualize yourself just looking at them.
Just admiring how wonderful one person can possibly be.
When you think about them,
You canít help but smile because you canít hold in how good you are feeling.
And when you are in Love,
You know that if something was to ever happen to them,
You would cry until you could no longer open your eyes,
Then you would cry even more.

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I think you are so right - Love is
a strong emotion - Great Poem --
I loved the ending

Teresa King
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2 posted 04-16-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

great poem but you forgot one thing that love is

Love waking up beside someone and you can't wait to talk to them because you missed them while you were asleep

Jeffrey
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Oh...Yes..LOVED it! There is so much to write about love, it is hard to fit it into one poem! I feel the same as you with your poem...I can relate, this is how I am when I am in love


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