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The Night

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Lone Ranger
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since 04-16-2000
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Salvador , Bahia , Brazil


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The Night

I stand here alone
Looking out at the night
It's hard to believe
Things are not right

My life is not the way
I wanted it to be
It's not anyone's fault
It's just me

I live my life by the What If
I wish I could change that
People try to help me
Some why I don't let  

My friends?
They just seem to get in my way
Every time I'm doing something
They leave me with nothing to say

The wolf howls in the night
But he loves the day
I love many other things
But I just can't say
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 04-16-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

A sorrowful poem of a cry of despair.
yet, leaving the reader with hope that
you love many things and your 'lone night
pain' is a passing thing.

Warm Regards,
Teresa King
lucky
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since 01-17-2000
Posts 1648
Idaho


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Well Ranger,

Should I say your off on a roll, and I extend a welcome from passions. Your work is a fire they'll soon come to know. This is a fine debut, I hope your stocked with a life full of happenings.

Lucky_Dale
 
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