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Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

0 posted 2000-04-16 01:06 AM



The Night

I stand here alone
Looking out at the night
It's hard to believe
Things are not right

My life is not the way
I wanted it to be
It's not anyone's fault
It's just me

I live my life by the What If
I wish I could change that
People try to help me
Some why I don't let  

My friends?
They just seem to get in my way
Every time I'm doing something
They leave me with nothing to say

The wolf howls in the night
But he loves the day
I love many other things
But I just can't say

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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-04-16 02:50 AM


A sorrowful poem of a cry of despair.
yet, leaving the reader with hope that
you love many things and your 'lone night
pain' is a passing thing.

Warm Regards,
Teresa King

lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
2 posted 2000-04-16 03:08 AM


Well Ranger,

Should I say your off on a roll, and I extend a welcome from passions. Your work is a fire they'll soon come to know. This is a fine debut, I hope your stocked with a life full of happenings.

Lucky_Dale

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