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lucky
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0 posted 2000-04-16 12:55 PM


Noodles...

Some folks think I’m crazy_, Slightly goofy in the head_, My wife is lookin’ kinda’ blank_, Can’t hear the things I’ve said_.

People keep on muttering_, No tellin’ what they say_, If they would just enunciate_, Now... that would be the day_!

I guess it’s their conclusion_, As they’re looking at my head_. Poor guy has lost his noodles_, and nuts he’s found instead_.



 

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-16 01:27 AM


yup...that about sums it up...lol

Jeffrey

Jim Hastings
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2 posted 2000-04-16 08:28 AM


I liked it.  Brought a smile to my lips.  

 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?


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3 posted 2000-04-16 09:54 AM


Lucky~
I MUST like nuts ...
I picked YOU for a friend !  
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2000-04-16 11:33 AM


Cute...my grandfather used to tell me when I was bad, that I'd get 13 lashes with a wet noodle....  
Pepper
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5 posted 2000-04-16 12:01 PM


LOL ... Really funny ...  


 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

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6 posted 2000-04-16 04:15 PM


Yup, I'm with Marge, M&M's with nuts please.
lucky
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7 posted 2000-04-16 07:48 PM


Maybe I should write about passion fruits, of course everybody here likes nuts, even if their served with tunafish and M&M's covered with chocolate and candy coated shells. Can you believe that..? Marinated Doves, Spanish Rats, and those disgusting Gulls. Hay, I like Gulls long as they don't get any closer then this. How else would I get rid of those daz old dried up french

fries.

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