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Unspeakable Pain

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Lone Ranger
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since 04-16-2000
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Salvador , Bahia , Brazil


0 posted 04-16-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger



                       Inside

Why?
Do I keep on suffering like that
I've given up the fight
But my heart just can't forget

I felt the laughter
The joy and the pain
But after all that I have done
I think it was in vain

My friends try to judge me
Try to tell me what to do
I should've listened to my heart
Instead of listening to you

It's not like I can explain
What is in my soul
But with this wound inside my heart
Where can I go?

I feel like I'm lost
A soul in the crowd
I am filled with words
I just can't speak aloud

The truth is
I don't know what to do
I'm looking for a savior
But no one seems to be true

God please help me!
Please show me the way
I am lost in a maze of thoughts
But I have nothing left to say


[This message has been edited by Lone Ranger (edited 04-16-2000).]
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Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!


1 posted 04-16-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to passions
Very impressive first post.
Nice flow to this piece.

Jeffrey
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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2 posted 04-16-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Lone Ranger! Welcome to Passions.

I am fairly new myself.

This is a delightful poem that flows
wonderfully.  Thanks for sharing.

netswan
One Who Understands
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Cedar Rapids, Iowa


3 posted 04-16-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Great poem.  Welcome, I am looking forward to reading more of your pieces
serenity blaze
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4 posted 04-16-2000 04:13 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Welcome to Passions--this is a great place to speak those silent words...looking forward to more...Nice work, here.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


5 posted 04-16-2000 04:23 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Sad to hear your heart in so much pain   hope all gets better with time!I will pray for you and ask for healing of your heart



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-16-2000).]
lucky
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6 posted 04-16-2000 04:39 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Hay, sorry about that Ranger some of the guys around here arn't as "ROMANTIC HEARTS" as they appear. Not to worry though you'll have plenty of times to catch 'um. There's a lot of them that like to crawl out of the woodwork in the wee hours of the morning while your sleeping thinking they won't get theirs. Just remember their "Handles" then tomorrow you can hit them with... Breaker breaker 911 Romantic Heart on the loose.

(Romantic Heart, thanks for the Edit - Lucky)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-16-2000).]
Frank Bucciero
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7 posted 04-16-2000 04:42 AM       View Profile for Frank Bucciero   Email Frank Bucciero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Frank Bucciero

i thought it was very deep!
nice work ranger

 
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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8 posted 04-16-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

This is a very haunting and poignant poem. Deeply moving, and very well written.  I am so sorry about your sorrow.
Lone Ranger
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Salvador , Bahia , Brazil


9 posted 04-16-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

Thank You All!!
You have no idea how good it is to see that my poems actually touch people's heart!!
I'll keep the good work , and honestly I hope that my pain doesn't lasts forever , even though it made me write this great poem...
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 04-16-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Welcome to Passions, Lone Ranger.  Nice entrance with this poem.  Great work!!  Well said....good flow and expression.  Looking forward to more...    

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Lone Ranger
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11 posted 04-16-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

I just edited this poem , improved it a little bit..
Hope you guys like it!


 
Poet deVine
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12 posted 04-16-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family....I enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome....  
 
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