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Sven
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0 posted 2000-04-15 10:35 PM


wherever i am
there you are
be it earth
of the farthest star
wherever i am
there you are

wherever you are
there am i
be it ground
or in the sky
wherever you are
there am i

wherever we are
there is love
love so pure
and sent from above
wherever we are
there is love

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Marina
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1 posted 2000-04-15 10:47 PM


This makes it quit a challenge for Hide and Seek now doesn't it!!  Remind me not to play with you!

Marina

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2 posted 2000-04-15 11:40 PM


DIVINE DEVOTION!!!!
you write it OH SO well.
perfect Sven,
take care,jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-04-16 09:02 AM


Such a sweet simple poem with simple words and a simple pledge of love. Simply lovely!!!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-04-16 09:05 AM


Sven,
Very nice enjoyed the read.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-04-16 09:44 AM


Sven~
You do a very nice job with these
lovely poems.
I so enjoy the read.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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6 posted 2000-04-16 12:47 PM


Thank you my friends. . .

Marina, it definitely makes Hide and Seek a lot more fun!!  

Janet, thank you. . . Divine?  Well, ok. . .

deVine, sometimes, you don't need a lot of words to say what's in your heart. . .

Sy, always good to hear from you, my friend. . .

Marge, thank you, it's just the way that I am. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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7 posted 2000-04-16 01:08 PM


A beautiful love poem, I'm glad that you have found true love.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Pepper
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8 posted 2000-04-16 01:14 PM


Lovely, Lovely, Lovely ....
Hey Sven; can you tell I like this piece?!!!  

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

Sven
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9 posted 2000-04-16 10:27 PM


Lovebug. . .thank you. . . it's wonderful.. .

Pepper, no, I can't tell that you really like this one!  LOL. . .thank you too, my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-04-19 11:16 PM


Sven,
Simple and sweet.  Nicely put!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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