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It Sure Ain't Raining Daffodils

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Marge Tindal
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It Sure Ain't Raining Daffodils
~*Marge Tindal*~

Pelting down
all around
raindrops
on my roof
sounds like
herds of buffalo
pounding on the hoof
No gentle drops
are dripping
on the window sill
It's raining buckets
of the stuff
and it sure ain't daffodils

*Poetic 'pologies to Robert Loveman
author of April Rain





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-15-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

*smiling*

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LOL....
Buckets, eh?
Not Cat's & Dogs???

Cute, Marge..
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Marge--take heart, the sun will bring light and all those rain nourished flowers will bloom, just for you.  
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Lotsa liquid sunshine down here, too, Marge. Let a Balladeer be your umbrella  
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Jeffrey~
I like the way you light up with *smiles*

Nan~
Just buckets
and buckets
and buckets !
I love the rain .. but this
is of Noah proportion !
Somebody send me a rainbow !

Martie~
I love the rain .. but this
is REALLY a downpour.  We do need
it and I usually say that when God
sends rain .. rain's my choice.
Oh the flowers will enjoy it for sure
if they don't drown !

Can you imagine those little Phlox
with life perservers on ?
LOL !  
You all are the greatest !
Love from rain-pelted Florida.
~*Marge*~



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Balladeer~
You slipped in there ...
neat trick !
Let's see that bumpershoot !
'Bout time you showed up today.
Been out puddle-jumping?
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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Well I been jumpin' but it ain't been puddles, it's been hurdles through my own soaking daffodils. I don't know if I can ever save face. Darn, I'm still so embarrased. Have the Rolling Stones been through lately..? I'm looking for the Beggars Banquet.

Still blush red.
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LUCKY~
I'm still laughing at your blush !
You've sure a comedic flair.
Saving 'it' for blackmail !
You remind me of a poet that used
to post here ... until .....  
LOL !
Get thee to the Spiritual Journey forum !
~*Marge*~

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It's been raining here all day too, Marge, getting ready for all those May flowers, I suppose!

Denise
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Marge,
Nice "wet" poem here!!  LOL.  Sorry for all the rain, but just think of those beautiful flowers that will be blossoming soon.  It ahs to end sometime....right??  Hope you stay warm and dry!!     


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Denise~
Well, guess we'll all have
oodles of flowers !

LoneWolf~
Thank you for the reply.
I was thinking that we might have
to give the flowers swimming lessons.
~*Marge*~


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Marge:...I must have heard you .. LOL

HUSG

 If I could, I would and if I didn't, I should have!
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Cool one Marge, I really liked this one.

chris

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Aaaaaaahhhh !
My RAINBOW !
Yes, indeed !
What a perfect omen for the day !
Love you, gal !

ChrisG~
Thank you, love.
~*Marge*~


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So cute ...  
Still raining there, eh, Marge?!
I'll send you some beautiful Sunshine from For Lauderdale .... We have plenty today ...  


 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
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Pep~
No, today the sun came out to play.
THANK GOODNESS !  
But, it was nip and tuck there for a while.
This wasn't just rain ...
this was RAIN
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



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Yes, yesterday was unbelievable here , too !  I was talking to Brent about building an ark .... LOL
Glad the Sun is smiling on you today, Marge ...  
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Pep~
LOL on the Ark ..
I had Noah on standby alert here.
Have a 'sunshine' day yourself.
~*Marge*~


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Marge,
Rain rain go away
Little Marge wants to play.
May the rain bring you bouquets of flowers.
*L* Sy
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What? You're not getting flowers in your rain?? *L* Well me thinks it's time to send you some...(be looking in the air) lol

Love you hun,
~D


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Seymour~
Oh, yes ... wanted to play yesterday
and darn near drowned trying.
Gathering daffodils today !  
A little soggy, but they survived
with their little life preservers intact.

Devina~
Look up ... it's a flower ?
No, no ... I think that's supposed to
be 'pennies from Heaven' !  
It rained enough to buy flowers for sure.
Love you and your smile.
~*Marge*~


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