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Said And Done

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FreeSoul
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It was all up to you,
You should have known.
Out of this darkness
You could have grown.

There is nothing you can do,
It is all said and done.
Nothing looks too bright now,
Not even looking at the sun.

All you can do now is
To think about the past.
But doing that won't
Get you anywhere fast.

The only way out of it
You don't hold the key.
You are trapped, no escape
For you will there be.

There is nothing you can do,
It is all said and done.
Nothing looks too bright now,
Not even looking at the sun.

Things get said and done
Sometimes just too quick.
And then they become
What cannot be fixed.

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1 posted 04-15-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

You seem to be locked in on your emotions.
This is a wonderfully written glimpse at the inside of your heart. Keep 'em coming

Jeffrey
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