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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-04-15 03:26 PM


Peace
By: Amy M. Kennedy

I know the words of this song
I think I’ve known them all along
The words of my soul

A familiar feeling is washing over me
Thing becoming clearer, I now can see
In the light of the morning

I know this tune in my heart
I am happy now, at least this is a start
Feeling at peace with myself

It’s a new day, a new beginning
Perhaps today will have a happy ending
My heart is smiling

A calm surrounds me as I close my eyes
I know things are going to be okay
I smile and let out a sigh



 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-15 03:41 PM


Aimster, I really needed to hear this today, beautiful melodic rhythym in this one, and the message is superbly delivered.

Jeffrey

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-04-15 04:19 PM


Let me sigh with you amy-girl  
*SIGH*

very pretty poem amy..and perfect rhythm and flow...and so peaceful..
so just remember to take your own advice and *breathe*...*smile*
later amy-gator,
love ya, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Cerenity
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3 posted 2000-04-15 04:33 PM


Hi Aimster,

Oh yes this feeling is it not wonderful, I am so glad you hear a happy tune in your heart.

Cerenity

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4 posted 2000-04-15 04:35 PM


Amy~
Applauding here.
Keep the smiles and the positive outlook.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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5 posted 2000-04-15 05:24 PM


Aimster, This is great, very positive. To be at peace is indeed a great feeling.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-04-15 06:59 PM


Aimster,
Love your positive outlook on things.  Thanks for sharing....I needed this!!!  Great poem!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Aimster
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7 posted 2000-04-15 07:16 PM


awwww gee guys thanks...you're too sweet! i am glad you all liked this...take care!!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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