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Crux

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NamelessOne
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Crux

Tied up in your mystery
i was bound by your charm
the crux of a heartbreak
infinite harm
trusting again
but it was a trap
out on a limb i swayed
then i heard the snap
plummeting down
to a fate i created
should have seen it coming
my demise belated
i die another death
suffering torments untold
my brain tripped a breaker
my heart stone cold
till i`m enchanted by another...
and love`s sweet kiss
wipes the slate clean
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1 posted 04-15-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

perfect show of the emotion of heartache
i enjoyed this much

Jeffrey
netswan
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2 posted 04-16-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wonderful, NamelessOne.  This poem
shows pain and courage ---and flows
great.

Teresa King
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This is another beautiful piece from you...filled with so much emotions!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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4 posted 04-19-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

wow. i don't even know what to say. expectations of what another may or may not be will be the death of me as well.


*****kynder

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