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Response to response (For Liz)

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Seymour Tabin
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  Response to response (For Liz)

'Twas I that sent the meadow lark,
On open wings into the dark.
To set upon the weathered post,
With a message from this host.

'Twas not a song of warbling bird,
But my spirit that you heard.
Given in the meadowlarks cry,
To tell you how I pine and sigh.

I sent it on the mornings breeze,
A serenade, a songs appease.
To know the truth of what I felt,
Before the morning dew could melt.

To tell you of my idealize,
To help you come to realize.
The message that ensnares the wind,
Can never ever be exscind.

This spirit circles only you,
It only sings of what is true.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
Thanking you for your reply
To my poem of a songbird's cry
A melody with my name I heard
How did you train that little bird?
Liz  
Marge Tindal
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Seymour~

Well, now that we're all a'twitter ...
this is wonderful !
You two still do the greatest
HE said ... SHE said !
May it ever be so.

Love ya'
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 04-15-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
A beautiful answer Glad you enjoyed the read.
Love Sy

Marge,
Thank you so much for the sweet comment. *L*
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this is so great to read Sy
what perfect rhyme flow
and the imagery is superb.
very nice kind sir.
take care, jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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Janet,
Thank you so much for the sweet comment.
Marge Tindal
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I found another smile in my remember of Seymour~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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