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Dining on Myself

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zipknee
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Oak Park, IL


0 posted 04-15-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

I have swallowed myself
drank every last bit of soul
filled my insides with emotion
I have sucked in my tears
to quench my thirsty spirit
I have filled myself so full
sometimes I can't even breathe
I let anger digest the hurt
I consume pieces of happiness
to compress the morsels of sadness
when the insides become too full
I express a few simple thoughts
to make room for the complex ones
I nibble on my fears for a while
to make them easier to swallow
even after consuming all this
I must swallow the bullsh*t of others too.
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 04-15-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is one for refrigerator, yes?

Seriously, luv--I do love this...deep...
the expression flowed here....thanx.
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
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2 posted 04-16-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Zipknee

This is so neet, I have found myself doing this trying to pack more in then take on evry body else's too, very good job with this one.

Cerenity
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