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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 04-15-2000 02:29 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sitting alone on the beach
Your heart no longer within reach
I am here watching the rising of the sun
Its beauty is second to none

The sand is cool on my skin
My mind starts to spin
I watch the sun reflect on the bay
It shimmers and gleams each and every way

The cool breeze sends ripples over the lake
It chills me and I start to shake
Before me is your image now
Are you a mirage or here somehow

I see you walk along the water's edge
To love you always was my pledge
This has all been a dream
Not as real as it seems

I am here on the shore
Wishing there could have been more
Looking all around
My heart begins to pound

I really thought you'd come back
My world wouldn't be so black
I miss you being there today
Maybe we could find another way


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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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netswan
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1 posted 04-15-2000 03:13 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ah Lone wolf, such great description
of a morning on the beach, too bad it
had to have such a mournful cry --
Well written.  Thanks for sharing.


 Teresa King
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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 04-15-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Teresa,
Thank you.  Love the beach, but guess it is kind of bittersweet.  Lots of memories there. You are welcome for sharing.  Maybe it can be different....  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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3 posted 04-15-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Great poem Wolfman, I enjoyed it much

Jeffrey
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 04-15-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I can feel this one tearing deep inside.  This poem takes me there. Very special and very sad.
I relate to your name.  Lone Wolf.  My e-mail name is mountain recluse.  Lone Wolf has a special mournful feel to it.  Excellent name, if a person is feeling that way.


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 04-15-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jeffrey,
Thanks....happy to oblige.  

Rosemary,
Thank you and it does tear deep.  I feel sad about the whole thing.  
As for my name, it is a perfect fit I think.  I can relate to yours too.  Yes, it is how I feel.    

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
hsystems
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6 posted 04-15-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Lone Wolf - Beautiful, my friend!  Investing your heart and soul in a relationship, and then having it end, can make you feel emotionally bankrupt.  I'm glad that you are able to get your feelings out in your poetry.  I hope it helps you as much as it helps me to do that!


Troy

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