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I Feel Loved When You Love me

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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 04-15-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I feel loved when you love me,
Like the way you hold me tight,

Laying beside you every night,
I feel loved when you love me,

Its the way you touch my hair,
The way you look at me and stare,

I love the fire in your eyes,
How your heart hides no disguise,

I feel  protected by your arms,
I serender to all your charms,

I feel loved when you love me,
Like the way you kiss me soft and slow,

Its the way you touch my soul,
I loose all self-control,

I feel loved when you love me,
When we dance close and tight,

You kiss my hand and turn out the light,
Moving slowly across the floor,

The way you leave me wanting more,
Never knowing whats in store,

I feel loved when you love me,
Its the way you make me smile,

The way you romance me in style,
Its the way your heart is true,

The way that you whisper "I Love You"
I feel loved so loved when you love me....

Its the Roses that you bring,
Its the songs that you sing,

Its the times when I cry,
When we have to say goodbye,
You wipe the tears from my eyes...

The way you love me....

Its the tenderness in your touch,
Your soft voice I miss so much,

I love the way you love me,
Its the way you make me laugh,

The times we shared a romantic bubble bath,
While soft candles where lit,

Lovely music was played,
Moments I 'll never forget,

It's the way you love me.....

Its the way I am first in your life,
You honor me as your wife,

When you respect my feelings so,
The way you always want to know,

What I'm feeling inside,
It's the way you love me......

It's the poems that you write for me,
Sonnets serenaded for only me to see,

The pinics in the park,
Romantic walks after dark,

The way you love me....

It the spotaineous surpize,
The happiness in you eyes,

Wanting to please me just right,
Reading the cards that you write,

Its the way you love me.......
That makes me love you.....




 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-15-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Man Oh Man, That's what I call emotion.
Beautifully crafted..wish we all could feel so loved

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-15-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Jeff...I wrote it with music in mind as a Love song.....I feel if you keep dreaming your wishes will come true someday...

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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netswan
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3 posted 04-15-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ah to feel so loved.  Lucky girl.
Great emotional pretty piece, would
make a great song.

Teresa King
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4 posted 04-15-2000 07:59 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Romantic Heart,

Sounds like you have a real keeper!  Great poem....I hope he reads it.

INclan
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5 posted 04-15-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Love is as much how someone makes you feel
as the way you feel for someone.  You have captured the essence of that expression in this poem.  Wonderfully written!
This is one of the better poetic expressions of Love that i have read in Passions. Hope it gets a lot of response.


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A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 04-16-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Inclan he has read it ....

Danny thank you...I hope so too,This is what love means to me..


 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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7 posted 04-16-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Wow that was increadible!!!!
I was starting to get a little gelous thought
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 04-16-2000 04:32 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks steve!!!!your compliments are Welcome!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


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9 posted 04-16-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

wowowoowow what is in the air tonite powerful poem there yuh

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10 posted 04-16-2000 04:45 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Walt....Love is in the air!!!! do do do... It's that time of year ya know..spring has sprung!!!hehe!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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11 posted 04-16-2000 06:34 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Nice poem, up until you said he puts you first before anything else, and then not to mention the 35 times or so you mention "I, me, mine, I'll, and so on, etcetera" Your a little self-centered for my taste. I love most of all how my wife puts "God" first before anything else, especially before me.

(Romantic Heart, Thanks for editing your reply on Lone Ranger's poem. It wasn't a very nice thing to say to a newcomer. I did e-mail him in your stead and apologized for your "Sorry about your bad luck statement")

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-16-2000).]
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12 posted 04-16-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I wrote this about human love..That one person should come first before all others(example...ME being first in his life before all other women)not God...notice the next line..to honor me as his wife..Like GOD states in the bible..To love yourwife as Christ loves the church....simple to understand actually....
God gave us each other as a gift....God does
come first in MY LIfe and Hopefully his...Maybe I should have been more detailed and described the poem as Earthly LOve...
Judging one more time...for you do not know me...(unless your some one I do know, hidden behind Your identity) but...I am far from SELF-CENTERED....
You know other TRUE christians should not be so judgemental to their brothers or sisters in Christ...bad witness to the world..for we should love one another!
With longsuffering, patience, humility..etc..  GOD BLESS!!!!!!!!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com




[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-16-2000).]
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13 posted 04-16-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Romantic Heart, verily the Lord's love echoes through this poem, for only shadows of that Divine thought do we have to hold.  

Beautiful.

Alicat, the Persnikitty

P.S.: Lucky, seeing as how this poem is in the first-person perspective, why should it matter how many times the singular definitive is utilized?  Or is ya simply nitpicking for the sake of your 'game'?
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14 posted 04-16-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I agree with Alicat...seems you are being unfair, Lucky.

This is a lovely poem!!
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15 posted 04-16-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

I'm not sure what "game" Ali is talking about, but I can assure you it is over. Now.

Personal attacks are never justified at Passions. Nor will they be tolerated. If your sole reason for posting at Passions is to bring hurt into another person's life, you are very simply in the wrong place. And that can be easily rectified.

For the second time, if necessary.

BE NICE! Or begone...
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16 posted 04-16-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Thanks everybody for the tips. I wouldn't have said anything at all if it hadn't been for Romantic's comment (reply) to Lone Rangers first post last night... and Alicat the Persnikitty, seeing as how this poem IS in the first-person perspective, why should it matter how many times the singular definitive is utilized..? Well Alicat, my wife writes a considerable amount of poems about me, howbeit that it is my name which appears numbers of times instead of hers... and anyway this has nothing to do with her poem, however it made for a rightous reply for her posted reply to Lone Ranger's first post. If anyone here is playing a game, it sure is not I. I already sense that Romantic is a bit suspicious that I may know her. Words from ones own mouth can sure point the finger in the right direction. Rosemary and myself and also Lone Ranger know exactly what happened. As I said this is childs play, not to mention very unsportsman like. She has my e-mail and could have written. Her Poem speaks for itself... Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
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17 posted 04-16-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

That sounds clear enough to me.
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LOL! Trust Balladeer to get right to the crux of the matter.

However, as enigmatic as your post might be, lucky, it seems evident that pain is still your intent. I repeat, there is no justification for personal attacks, and we certainly don't need vigilantes at Passions. If you took umbrage with something you should have brought it before a Moderator. That's why they're here.

And that's why you're not...
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19 posted 04-16-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh I feel loved in this writing and I am only reading it    WOnderful as always Romantic Heart  

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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20 posted 04-16-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Romantic I hope your dreams come true, to put this to song! This is just beautiful!

Ron I just have to say I love how you worded that!
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21 posted 04-17-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

It's come to my attention there's only four minutes between my warning post and lucky's unfortunate reply - and therefore the very real chance he was composing his response and never recieved the warning.

I don't want to be unfair, so I'm reinstating his posting privileges. Whether they remain or not will depend on future actions.

I want to strongly reinforce a very basic truth about Passions: We're here to help each other, to understand each other in some small way, and not to cause each other pain. There are bound to be misunderstandings from time to time. Lashing out in anger is never a good response.
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22 posted 04-17-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ron~
You're a fair man to all parties.
That's an appreciative gesture on
your part.  As one who has been the
object of past retributions from a
disgruntled poster ... please know
that I applaud your administrative
posture.

*RomanticHeart~
Lovely words in your post.
Very romantically done.
Enjoyed it very, very much.

*Lucky~
Be the sweetheart I've come to know
you to be.  You have a tremendous
talent and I'd miss you if you weren't
here.  
You've been given a very fair chance.

Goodnight all.
This 'family' is just the greatest
circle to be in.
~*Marge*~



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23 posted 04-17-2000 03:39 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

First and formost I thank my God for such an understanding heart. I am truely Lucky to have Him in my corner... not to mention all the other caring hearts at Passions strating with none other than Ron. Makes me believe that Passions is truely a family that not only knows how to give but forgive. So, my apology to RH and to any other eyes who may have wondered in. I was out of place, and I won't let it happen again.

Most Sincerely, Dale Gwaltney
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24 posted 04-17-2000 04:14 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eyesplus2

WOW!! That truly is how Love is!! Thankyou for putting into words, which we all hold deep inside our Hearts
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