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I Feel Loved When You Love me
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I Feel Loved When You Love me |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I feel loved when you love me, Like the way you hold me tight, Laying beside you every night, I feel loved when you love me, Its the way you touch my hair, The way you look at me and stare, I love the fire in your eyes, How your heart hides no disguise, I feel protected by your arms, I serender to all your charms, I feel loved when you love me, Like the way you kiss me soft and slow, Its the way you touch my soul, I loose all self-control, I feel loved when you love me, When we dance close and tight, You kiss my hand and turn out the light, Moving slowly across the floor, The way you leave me wanting more, Never knowing whats in store, I feel loved when you love me, Its the way you make me smile, The way you romance me in style, Its the way your heart is true, The way that you whisper "I Love You" I feel loved so loved when you love me.... Its the Roses that you bring, Its the songs that you sing, Its the times when I cry, When we have to say goodbye, You wipe the tears from my eyes... The way you love me.... Its the tenderness in your touch, Your soft voice I miss so much, I love the way you love me, Its the way you make me laugh, The times we shared a romantic bubble bath, While soft candles where lit, Lovely music was played, Moments I 'll never forget, It's the way you love me..... Its the way I am first in your life, You honor me as your wife, When you respect my feelings so, The way you always want to know, What I'm feeling inside, It's the way you love me...... It's the poems that you write for me, Sonnets serenaded for only me to see, The pinics in the park, Romantic walks after dark, The way you love me.... It the spotaineous surpize, The happiness in you eyes, Wanting to please me just right, Reading the cards that you write, Its the way you love me....... That makes me love you..... "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Man Oh Man, That's what I call emotion. Beautifully crafted..wish we all could feel so loved Jeffrey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Jeff...I wrote it with music in mind as a Love song.....I feel if you keep dreaming your wishes will come true someday...  "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ah to feel so loved. Lucky girl. Great emotional pretty piece, would make a great song. Teresa King |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Romantic Heart, Sounds like you have a real keeper! Great poem....I hope he reads it. INclan |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Love is as much how someone makes you feel as the way you feel for someone. You have captured the essence of that expression in this poem. Wonderfully written! This is one of the better poetic expressions of Love that i have read in Passions. Hope it gets a lot of response. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Inclan he has read it  ....Danny thank you...I hope so too,This is what love means to me.. "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wow that was increadible!!!! I was starting to get a little gelous thought |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks steve!!!!your compliments are Welcome! "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wowowoowow what is in the air tonite powerful poem there yuh All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Walt....Love is in the air!!!! do do do... It's that time of year ya know..spring has sprung!!!hehe!"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nice poem, up until you said he puts you first before anything else, and then not to mention the 35 times or so you mention "I, me, mine, I'll, and so on, etcetera" Your a little self-centered for my taste. I love most of all how my wife puts "God" first before anything else, especially before me. (Romantic Heart, Thanks for editing your reply on Lone Ranger's poem. It wasn't a very nice thing to say to a newcomer. I did e-mail him in your stead and apologized for your "Sorry about your bad luck statement") [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I wrote this about human love..That one person should come first before all others(example...ME being first in his life before all other women)not God...notice the next line..to honor me as his wife..Like GOD states in the bible..To love yourwife as Christ loves the church....simple to understand actually.... God gave us each other as a gift....God does come first in MY LIfe and Hopefully his...Maybe I should have been more detailed and described the poem as Earthly LOve... Judging one more time...for you do not know me...(unless your some one I do know, hidden behind Your identity) but...I am far from SELF-CENTERED.... You know other TRUE christians should not be so judgemental to their brothers or sisters in Christ...bad witness to the world..for we should love one another! With longsuffering, patience, humility..etc.. GOD BLESS!!!!!!!!< !signature-->"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Romantic Heart, verily the Lord's love echoes through this poem, for only shadows of that Divine thought do we have to hold. Beautiful. Alicat, the Persnikitty P.S.: Lucky, seeing as how this poem is in the first-person perspective, why should it matter how many times the singular definitive is utilized? Or is ya simply nitpicking for the sake of your 'game'? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree with Alicat...seems you are being unfair, Lucky. This is a lovely poem!! |
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Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
I'm not sure what "game" Ali is talking about, but I can assure you it is over. Now. Personal attacks are never justified at Passions. Nor will they be tolerated. If your sole reason for posting at Passions is to bring hurt into another person's life, you are very simply in the wrong place. And that can be easily rectified. For the second time, if necessary. BE NICE! Or begone... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thanks everybody for the tips. I wouldn't have said anything at all if it hadn't been for Romantic's comment (reply) to Lone Rangers first post last night... and Alicat the Persnikitty, seeing as how this poem IS in the first-person perspective, why should it matter how many times the singular definitive is utilized..? Well Alicat, my wife writes a considerable amount of poems about me, howbeit that it is my name which appears numbers of times instead of hers... and anyway this has nothing to do with her poem, however it made for a rightous reply for her posted reply to Lone Ranger's first post. If anyone here is playing a game, it sure is not I. I already sense that Romantic is a bit suspicious that I may know her. Words from ones own mouth can sure point the finger in the right direction. Rosemary and myself and also Lone Ranger know exactly what happened. As I said this is childs play, not to mention very unsportsman like. She has my e-mail and could have written. Her Poem speaks for itself... Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That sounds clear enough to me. |
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Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
LOL! Trust Balladeer to get right to the crux of the matter. However, as enigmatic as your post might be, lucky, it seems evident that pain is still your intent. I repeat, there is no justification for personal attacks, and we certainly don't need vigilantes at Passions. If you took umbrage with something you should have brought it before a Moderator. That's why they're here. And that's why you're not... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh I feel loved in this writing and I am only reading it WOnderful as always Romantic Heart A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Romantic I hope your dreams come true, to put this to song! This is just beautiful! Ron I just have to say I love how you worded that! |
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Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
It's come to my attention there's only four minutes between my warning post and lucky's unfortunate reply - and therefore the very real chance he was composing his response and never recieved the warning. I don't want to be unfair, so I'm reinstating his posting privileges. Whether they remain or not will depend on future actions. I want to strongly reinforce a very basic truth about Passions: We're here to help each other, to understand each other in some small way, and not to cause each other pain. There are bound to be misunderstandings from time to time. Lashing out in anger is never a good response. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ron~ You're a fair man to all parties. That's an appreciative gesture on your part. As one who has been the object of past retributions from a disgruntled poster ... please know that I applaud your administrative posture. *RomanticHeart~ Lovely words in your post. Very romantically done. Enjoyed it very, very much. *Lucky~ Be the sweetheart I've come to know you to be. You have a tremendous talent and I'd miss you if you weren't here. You've been given a very fair chance. Goodnight all. This 'family' is just the greatest circle to be in. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
First and formost I thank my God for such an understanding heart. I am truely Lucky to have Him in my corner... not to mention all the other caring hearts at Passions strating with none other than Ron. Makes me believe that Passions is truely a family that not only knows how to give but forgive. So, my apology to RH and to any other eyes who may have wondered in. I was out of place, and I won't let it happen again. Most Sincerely, Dale Gwaltney |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
WOW!! That truly is how Love is!! Thankyou for putting into words, which we all hold deep inside our Hearts |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That takes a big man, Dale. Pleased to know you..... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jesus is in my heart, and through him and his love, his forgiveness, I am able to forgive you,(for it is Christ who lives within me , not I to receive the glory for his love)For I am cruified in Christ! for ALL of us make mistakes and not one is perfect or better than the other,(For God is no respector of persons)WHo am I to ask for forgiveness for my sins, if I cannot have the same love and forgiveness for others!WE all have to help our brothers and sisters,But do it THROUGH LOVE, For love is above all, through all, and in all, LOVE covers a multitude of sins, of all these, Chairty and love are the greatest!This situation reminds me of Romans 8:28...for all things work to the GOOD for those who love the LORD! Forgiveness and love holds no record of wrongs, for CHrist himself , says our sins are forgiven and they are thrown as far as the EAST to West (EAST to West in distance could never be measured) so are sins (after asking for forgiveness ,are Gone forever)...and it is with agaphe love, and this kind of forgivess that your apology is accepted...and FORGOTTEN,forever! I am so grateful and happy to belong to such a loving, caring family of friends at passions whose words of comfort, hearts of love, have touched me beyound measure, We are truely blessed to have such love, such mature minds,intelligent people around us, For this circle is a bond which unites us heart and soul! I am eternally grateful for ALL of you being a part of my heart! LOve in Christ Jesus, Mett < !signature--> [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
I guess that everyone has already said averything that could be said about this poem... Oh yeah , it's a great poem and truly I wish I could feel the same way as you I just loved it! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yippee!! I loved this!! Welcome....as a woman, there's nothing more romantic than feeling as if you come first and boy we sure did in this one and about time!! congratulations and looking forward to seeing and reading more...... great job! Kathleen |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone Ranger:Thank you for your rose and the reply!!! Irish Rose: Thanks for reading and for your compliment! |
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