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Broken Heart Beating
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Broken Heart Beating |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Locked inside and pounding its way out, my broken heart beats furiously. Memories of you infect my brain. I miss you, and these black tears are expressing my sorrow. Drowning in this possibly self-inflicted misery is killing me. I want to see you, but I know that the cold harshness you'd greet me with would not ease the pain. I despise myself for needing you, an unfeeling shell of nothingness, to love me. "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
sKiTtLeS, I think you should listen to the words of your friend "don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened" Jeffrey |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Jeffery, thanks. This is an old one of mine, I've been feeling a lot better since then. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
sKITtLeS, I was going back and looking around and found this of yours and i`m glad i did .You really supercharge your work with such emotion, i enjoy your writing. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is lovely and filled with so much emotion. well done  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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