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Broken Heart Beating

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sKiTtLeS
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0 posted 04-15-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Locked inside and pounding its way out,
my broken heart beats furiously.
Memories of you infect my brain.
I miss you,
and these black tears are expressing my sorrow.
Drowning in this possibly self-inflicted misery
is killing me.
I want to see you, but I know that the cold harshness you'd greet me with would not ease the pain.
I despise myself for needing you, an unfeeling shell of nothingness,
to love me.


 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend
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1 posted 04-15-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

sKiTtLeS, I think you should listen to the words of your friend

"don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened"

Jeffrey
sKiTtLeS
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2 posted 04-15-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Jeffery, thanks.
This is an old one of mine, I've been feeling a lot better since then.

sKiTtLeS~

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend
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3 posted 04-16-2000 03:01 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

sKITtLeS,
I was going back and looking around and found this of yours and i`m glad i did .You really supercharge your work with such emotion, i enjoy your writing.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 04-16-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is lovely and filled with so much emotion. well done  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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