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Poet deVine
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Night succumbs
      To days embrace
            Winds song becomes
                       Just a trace

         And in this
             Quiet
         I think of you

Lavender blue
      Tears from my eyes
             Sweet longing are
                  My lonely sighs

        And with these
             Tears
          I cry for you

The breeze sweeps
        Across my face
              As night succumbs
                    To days embrace

             And in this
                 Quiet
               I need you



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-15-2000).]
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 04-15-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, I liked this, I could feel the breeze gently sweeping through it. excellent and i love the design really neat.  
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2 posted 04-15-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I can't find the words I'm looking for.
Awww, you did get one heck of *sigh* though.
Sad and sweet, and love them Lavender blue tears!
Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 04-15-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Well, well...PdV.. I don't know if I should be happy for you or sad for you...Either way this is a very good poem....so sweet it's message...who could resist a plea like that...         

Jeffrey
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4 posted 04-15-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

shhhhh Poet D just wrote the most beautiful poem..its perfect...
but she is over there in the
lovely quiet of her poem...
Ill tell her later how much I loved this.
perfect PD(smile)


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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5 posted 04-15-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Hushed, lovely, flowing words, PDV.  Almost like a gentle whisper...truly beautiful.  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
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6 posted 04-15-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is a wonderful rendition of the best and most introspective time of day... Nice job, my friend..
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Great Job PDV....wonderful.

chris

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8 posted 04-15-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

deVine, were you on my balcony last night?

This is wonderful. . .I can feel the wind and see the pinks and lavenders meshing into a final red of last light. . .

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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9 posted 04-15-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Perfectly lovely--soft and sweet with longing.
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10 posted 04-15-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PoetdeVine~

There's a hush in this
that speaks your heart.
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 04-15-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Sharon!  

Denise
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12 posted 04-15-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This is sweet, yet sad.  I love the colors!!  Great job and creative layout.  

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13 posted 04-16-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I felt goose bumps, it was so sweeping, and vivid, and flowing.

 Kathleen

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14 posted 04-16-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

poetdevine,
are you also in every poet?
this is an amasingly beautiful poem, i'll check out your other things as well.
seriouly lovely and true and smooth reading.
thank you for your words
kindly,
redheart angrybraids
 
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