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Not Many Words

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Sven
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0 posted 04-14-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Together here
Nothing to fear
Shed no tears
I'll hold you dear

Hearts aflame
Always the same
Playing no games
I know your name

Passions desire
Fueling the fire
Climbing the spires
I'm not a liar

Love always
Fills the days
Shining like rays
I know many ways

Always together
Leave you never
In any weather
Our bond won't sever

Together
Hearts
Passions
Love
Always. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-14-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Well put Sven, you are truly a romantic at heart. I love this piece

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-14-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I really like the style you use here Sven.  The flow is as lovely as words themselves.  Another beauty!  I must find out your secret!

Marina
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3 posted 04-14-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I needed to hear something like this right now Sven...you've written some beautiful words here...keep em coming, will ya?

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

netswan
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4 posted 04-15-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Sheer Romantic Poetry, Sven. Thanks for
sharing - I enjoyed it.

Teresa King
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5 posted 04-15-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Simply beautiful, Sven. Just gorgeous. I love the way your words promise.

sKiTtLeS~

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-the words of a friend
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6 posted 04-15-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Change it somewhat, and it's the same for true friends  Sven  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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7 posted 04-15-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven,
This is simple, yet beautiful.  Excellent!!  I love it.  You are writing with such feeling....wonderful words.


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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8 posted 04-15-2000 05:09 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is beautiful, as always, Sven...heartfelt and intriguing with promise.
I love your work!!!
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Sven~
Such sweet romantic words that flow from your heart through to your pen.
Great poem.
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks

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10 posted 04-15-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

Jeffrey, yes I am. . . a born romantic. . .

Marina, secret?  Yes, yes. . . ancient Sumerian secret!!  

Devina, you're welcome. . . and yes, there are more where that came from. . .

netswan, glad that you liked it.. .

Skittles, thank you. . . I try to show that.. .

Isis, yes, it could be true for friends too. . .

LW, thank you. . . and yes, I am writing with feeling. . .

serenity, thank you too. . . and I love your work as well!!

tracie, thank you. . . my pen continues to pour out words. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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