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Lady Web
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0 posted 2000-04-14 10:31 PM


hiya now its time for me to say bye-ya

[This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-16-2000).]

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-14 10:37 PM


I can certainly relate to your pain. There are no easy answers in love or heartbreak.
Yet over time all wounds heal ,. maybe not completely but it does get easier.Keep your head up.

Jeffrey

snuffy
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2 posted 2000-04-14 10:41 PM


sounds really sad


U really did wear your emotions on your sleeve in your poem.
Love is beautiful, yet so painful....

Your poem transmits your emotions very honestly and clear......
Great poem!



Snuffy

netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-14 10:43 PM


Hi Lady Web!  Heartfelt poem.  And, yes
time eases these pains -- Sometimes,
we think they will never heal, but they
do.  Don't waste your life on unrequited
love.

Keep writing. Poetry is such a great way
to pour out our thoughts and slowly dull
the pain --- Write some fun ones and make
it a challenge --)

Kind of like writing Christmas stuff in
the middle of a very hot summer --)

Teresa King

Lady Web
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4 posted 2000-04-14 10:59 PM


This piece was written some time ago. Still
testing the waters, But definitly like it
here.
Thanks for the input, and yes I do intend to
dabble in other subjects. as I continue to
write

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5 posted 2000-04-14 11:03 PM


LadyWeb~
Glad to read in your reply
that you're now treading calmer waters.

This was a heart-felt poem.
Enjoyed the read.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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