How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 The Pain I Hide
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

The Pain I Hide

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Lady Web
Member
since 04-12-2000
Posts 97
Houston, Texas


0 posted 04-14-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

hiya now its time for me to say bye-ya

[This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-16-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Melissa Lopez - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 04-08-2000
Posts 2424
State of constant confusion!


1 posted 04-14-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I can certainly relate to your pain. There are no easy answers in love or heartbreak.
Yet over time all wounds heal ,. maybe not completely but it does get easier.Keep your head up.

Jeffrey
snuffy
Junior Member
since 04-01-2000
Posts 19


2 posted 04-14-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for snuffy   Email snuffy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snuffy

sounds really sad


U really did wear your emotions on your sleeve in your poem.
Love is beautiful, yet so painful....

Your poem transmits your emotions very honestly and clear......
Great poem!



Snuffy
netswan
Senior Member
since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


3 posted 04-14-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Lady Web!  Heartfelt poem.  And, yes
time eases these pains -- Sometimes,
we think they will never heal, but they
do.  Don't waste your life on unrequited
love.

Keep writing. Poetry is such a great way
to pour out our thoughts and slowly dull
the pain --- Write some fun ones and make
it a challenge --)

Kind of like writing Christmas stuff in
the middle of a very hot summer --)

Teresa King
Lady Web
Member
since 04-12-2000
Posts 97
Houston, Texas


4 posted 04-14-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

This piece was written some time ago. Still
testing the waters, But definitly like it
here.
Thanks for the input, and yes I do intend to
dabble in other subjects. as I continue to
write
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


5 posted 04-14-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LadyWeb~
Glad to read in your reply
that you're now treading calmer waters.

This was a heart-felt poem.
Enjoyed the read.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lady Web will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> The Pain I Hide Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors