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Simply Red

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Alicat
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0 posted 04-14-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

With auburn hair and hazel eyes
Dressed in velvet of the skies
Oft am I found lost in thought
Of one much purtier than chamber pot

With green flecked eyes she looks my way
As wind causes auburn locks to sway
And I am found bereft of thought
Save for one purtier than chamber pot

Thence I gaze and no not why
Watching velvet of the sky
Blushing as she returns my stare
This purty one of auburn hair

Alicat, the Kilted Persnikitty

(there ya go  *grin*)


As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash!  --Alicat



[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-14-2000).]
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Justine Uff
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1 posted 04-14-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for Justine Uff   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justine Uff

Where's yer kilt, Laddie??

Poet deVine
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2 posted 04-14-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I've just returned from WalMart
Auburn coloring, Clairol hue
To find that someone else
was here to tantalize you
Forsooth, kind lad, I trust
that before you tie the knot
you lift the skirt of my bed
and seek there, my chamberpot!


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3 posted 04-15-2000 07:39 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Ms. DeVine,
Wonderful reply for a wonderful piece, but it sure does make me wonder who Ali was thinking about when he wrote that..
Oh come on Ali it was only fair that I came to tell you that you wrote like the poet that I remember well, but at the same time I have to harass you a bit.   Yea, I know what are friends for..  
Hmmm, let me think maybe it was.. Nah, that could never be.. Or maybe, nah, but it could be.. Hmmm.. Let me sleep on it and I'll find the answer by morning. hehehe..
Love Ya Cat!! Keep writing that good stuff and I will be here to read it.

Love,
Lady



 Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

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4 posted 04-15-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

O Kindred spirit of Insanity...you've frightened me--I UNDERSTOOD this--(at least we think we did...)  Post more, please, sir.
Alicat
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5 posted 04-15-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Justin Uff: Thanks for the reminder..as you can see, I fixed that one.  

PdV: Hehehe...oooops..    Thanky for the invite, though I do wonder why's youse has a chamber pot unna yer bed......Ah's reckon there's thangs a man is not wont to know...

Ladycat:  Hehehe..guess all ya want, you will NEVER get it right.   *cackles with insane glee*

Serenity: As we are, is we are, we is Ali...we think.  As per ya'll's request, we will try to accommodate.  


Alicat, the Kilted Persnikitty  


 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat

 
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