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netswan
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0 posted 04-14-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Just Imagine

warm sun, basking shoulders
gaily wading, barely splashing
blue water, salty tasting
sandy feet, slightly sinking
children, gaily building castles
colorful sailboats, gently swaying

Imagine

fishermen reeling shimmering fish
filling buckets, busy laughing
towels drying, softly flapping
sand fleas, jumping nipping
green seaweed, gooey slimy
kicking plastic beach balls, shining

Imagine

turning rocks, crab finding
logs rolling, balance trying
shovels digging, clams squirting
pretending pirates, treasure hunting
sea gulls diving, soaring squawking
barnacle dodging, rock collecting


Just Imagine




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1 posted 04-14-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Oh, I'm there.  Wonderful images alive in my head now... thank you so much for sharing.


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Yep...

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Visions of shimmering fish gleaming in the sunlight assail me . I think I'll go fishing Monday .
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Thanks for the 'imaginings', Teresa!  

Denise
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5 posted 04-14-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

. singing . Sitting on the dock of the bay,
watching the tide roll a- oh!` hi! great poem
thanks for the memories

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NetSwan~
This is sooooooooo enticing !
I hear the Florida Keys calling my name.
You sure did a great job with the
imagery in this.
~*Marge*~


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Ahhhh.......I can smell the salt in the air and feel the sun shine down on me.....great imagery in this one!!  I enjoyed!!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


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Okay wheres my suntan lotion?
Thanks for reminding me how much I love the beach. excitingly clever
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