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The day you went away
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The day you went away |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
My heart is empty, I can't give, Without you,my love, I can't give, you anything, Since you had to leave me behind, I turn the light off at night, I feel so lonely, I want to kiss you, But I realise that you're here beside me, I want to shout you belong to me, you've gone, So far ,so far, dear, I can't hold you anymore, I want to know you really are the one for me, Inside, Deep in my heart is sad , so sad, Want to realise you're stilll with me, But Iam so helpless ,so helpless, You're not here, |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
so sad.....I am here if you need to talk about it Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your pain is oozing from your words..you've really put yourself in this poem! I hope the a pain eases soon.........  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vandana, Great job. You have obviously been burned and way bad. I am sorry that you feel this way, but writing about it is a great way to deal with that. I can feel your pain coming at me from the page....wow. That takes talent. Hang in there!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done Vandana... I hope he returns shortly. Well written. |
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