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The day you went away

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vandana
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0 posted 04-14-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

My heart is empty,
I can't give,
Without you,my love,
I can't give,
you anything,
Since you had to leave me behind,
I turn the light off at night,
I feel so lonely,
I want to kiss you,
But I realise that
you're here
beside me,
I want to shout
you belong to me,
you've gone,
So far ,so far, dear,
I can't hold you anymore,
I want to know
you really are the one for me,
Inside,
Deep in my heart
is sad , so sad,
Want to realise you're stilll with me,
But Iam so helpless ,so helpless,
You're not here,
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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-14-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

so sad.....I am here if you need to talk about it

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-14-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Your pain is oozing from your words..you've really put yourself in this poem! I hope the a pain eases soon.........  
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 04-14-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Vandana,
Great job.  You have obviously been burned and way bad.  I am sorry that you feel this way, but writing about it is a great way to deal with that.  I can feel your pain coming at me from the page....wow.  That takes talent.  Hang in there!!  

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4 posted 04-14-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done Vandana...  I hope he returns shortly.  Well written.
 
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