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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Candlelight While candlelight caressed her silken skin, Translucent shadows flickered in her eyes. Her words were scarcely heard above the din, Of racing hearts and plaintive longing sighs. She touched my hand and held my loving gaze, Within us burned a raging lover’s fire. Those lips that glistened with a moistened glaze, Were met with an explosion of desire. This quickening of heart and love and mind, This evidence of love with life imbued, That with this kiss our love may be defined, And with our love this man may be renewed. This memory of how she made me whole, Indelibly is etched upon my soul. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Those lips that glistened with a moistened glaze, Were met with an explosion of desire. This quickening of heart and love and mind, This evidence of love with life imbued, That with this kiss our love may be defined, And with our love this man may be renewed. This memory of how she made me whole, Indelibly is etched upon my soul. ---------------- *SIGH* *SONNET SIGH* you got me again  perfection sir, take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
FLAWLESS!!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woah woah woah woah What Nan said and coming from Nan thats a double woah! hot durn good poem! All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow, you do write a great love poem!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
David, WOW!!!!! Excellent work!!! This is beautiful and romantic. I loved it and thank you for sharing.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my!!! I love this..... this is really good sir!!!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
David, your sonnets are always so beautiful and well done! A pleasure to read! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ This is such a pretty sonnet. Soft and lilting. Rolls so easily off the tongue and falls gently to rest in the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written. I bow to your poetic prowness. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Beautiful, David - Well written and very touching - thanks for sharing. Teresa King |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You words have a way with me, A way that puts my heart at ease, "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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