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Candlelight

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David2
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0 posted 04-14-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for David2

Candlelight

While candlelight caressed her silken skin,
Translucent shadows flickered in her eyes.
Her words were scarcely heard above the din,
Of racing hearts and plaintive longing sighs.
She touched my hand and held my loving gaze,
Within us burned a raging loverís fire.
Those lips that glistened with a moistened glaze,
Were met with an explosion of desire.
This quickening of heart and love and mind,
This evidence of love with life imbued,
That with this kiss our love may be defined,
And with our love this man may be renewed.

This memory of how she made me whole,
Indelibly is etched upon my soul.

© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-14-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Those lips that glistened with a moistened glaze,
Were met with an explosion of desire.
This quickening of heart and love and mind,
This evidence of love with life imbued,
That with this kiss our love may be defined,
And with our love this man may be renewed.

This memory of how she made me whole,
Indelibly is etched upon my soul.

----------------

*SIGH*  
*SONNET SIGH*

you got me again  
perfection sir,
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Nan
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2 posted 04-14-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

FLAWLESS!!

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 04-14-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

woah woah woah woah What Nan said and coming from Nan thats a double woah! hot durn good poem!

 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!
Martie
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4 posted 04-14-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wow, you do write a great love poem!!!
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 04-14-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

David,
WOW!!!!!  Excellent work!!!  This is beautiful and romantic.  I loved it and thank you for sharing.  

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6 posted 04-14-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh my!!! I love this..... this is really good sir!!!  
Denise
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7 posted 04-14-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

David, your sonnets are always so beautiful and well done! A pleasure to read!

Denise
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8 posted 04-14-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David2~
This is such a pretty sonnet.
Soft and lilting.
Rolls so easily off the tongue
and falls gently to rest in the heart.
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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9 posted 04-14-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Wonderfully written.  I bow to your poetic prowness.
netswan
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10 posted 04-14-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Beautiful, David - Well written and
very touching - thanks for sharing.

Teresa King
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11 posted 04-14-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

You words have a way with me,
A way that puts my heart at ease,



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