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Mistikman
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0 posted 04-14-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mistikman

In my life, I have withstood all kinds of pain
I have endured emotional torture, but still I remain
I have been tested in many ways, survived trial by fire
Some have tried to pull me down, but still I rose higher

I lived my life the target of others anger and spite
When I received only darkness, alone I found the light
When life attacked me, I sat there alone and bled
Covered with scars, I still go where others fear to tread

When death has come, I will heed the words he has spoken
But until then, my soul will remain as it is now, unbroken
© Copyright 2000 Travis Welton - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-14-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

this piece has an eery almost gothic feel to it
but i like it

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-14-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

"What doesn't kill us makes us stronger"

Good job, my friend.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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3 posted 04-14-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

yuh yuh  i love last 2 lines this impresses lil me for sure mistik keep it up yuh

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4 posted 04-14-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You are gaining strength in your craft as well as in your soul. Good poem sir!  
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5 posted 04-14-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mistik~
I have seen such growth in
your work.  You're reaching
another plane in your writing
future.  Keep it up ...
This is simply WONDERFUL !

Unmistakable ... you're 'Unbreakable'.
Love to you.
~*Marge*~


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That's the spirit! Great poem!

Denise
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7 posted 04-15-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Thanks all for reading and responding  
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~~~~Nice writing!~~~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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Ya know I'm glad to hear it! You are gaining strength, and that's wonderful!
Things like this make me so very sad, that people can treat others this way. And that one cannot see the self worth they have.
I know you don't believe what I'm about to say, but humans fail, to say the least, but when someone figures out how much their Creator actually loves them, it makes life all worth while.

Each individual in my eyes is worth love, and it's so sad to see when one thinks they have nothing to live for.
I was one who endured many years of abuse. But I tell ya what, somewhere that light came on and I realized I was worth more than that. And you are too buddy!  HUGS
 
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