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Unbreakable
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Unbreakable |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
In my life, I have withstood all kinds of pain I have endured emotional torture, but still I remain I have been tested in many ways, survived trial by fire Some have tried to pull me down, but still I rose higher I lived my life the target of others anger and spite When I received only darkness, alone I found the light When life attacked me, I sat there alone and bled Covered with scars, I still go where others fear to tread When death has come, I will heed the words he has spoken But until then, my soul will remain as it is now, unbroken |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
this piece has an eery almost gothic feel to it but i like it Jeffrey |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"What doesn't kill us makes us stronger" Good job, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh yuh i love last 2 lines this impresses lil me for sure mistik keep it up yuh All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are gaining strength in your craft as well as in your soul. Good poem sir!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mistik~ I have seen such growth in your work. You're reaching another plane in your writing future. Keep it up ...  This is simply WONDERFUL ! Unmistakable ... you're 'Unbreakable'. Love to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's the spirit! Great poem! Denise |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Thanks all for reading and responding |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~~Nice writing!~~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ya know I'm glad to hear it! You are gaining strength, and that's wonderful! Things like this make me so very sad, that people can treat others this way. And that one cannot see the self worth they have. I know you don't believe what I'm about to say, but humans fail, to say the least, but when someone figures out how much their Creator actually loves them, it makes life all worth while. Each individual in my eyes is worth love, and it's so sad to see when one thinks they have nothing to live for. I was one who endured many years of abuse. But I tell ya what, somewhere that light came on and I realized I was worth more than that. And you are too buddy! HUGS |
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