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Dark Angel
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Archangel


On
Moments of us
    I sink and relinquish
      to songs sung
by the tuneful
         Voice of you

       slowly
               falling
I surrender to you
     the archangel of my
                     heart

words whispered I
          send
   thoughts with
waves of
       emotions
  survived through
        deep oceans
  of my soul
          
to touch the
      tranquil essence
              of you


Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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1 posted 04-14-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: Beautiful as ever reaching for the soul..

HUSG
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Dark Angel,
    I enjoyed this. It was quite moving. You expressed your emotions quite well.
       david2
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Dark Angel,
    I enjoyed this. It was quite moving. You expressed your emotions quite well.
       david2
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These are your forte!! Wonderful Angel!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 04-14-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Reading this was like floating on a feather...so soft and sweet! Very good!  
Lone Wolf
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DA,
Excellent writing!!!  This is so warm and sweet.  It that spring in the air??? LOL.  I loved this!!  


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7 posted 04-14-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Cassanova   Email Cassanova   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cassanova

!!!


Wow! This reaches out and grabs one, now doesn't it! Beautiful verse, there doesn't seem to be much free verse around here, but this is aweseome!

Jason
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Very nice!

Denise
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DA,
   I always like the way the words just seem to "fall" (quite literally!) from your pen. . . this is very good!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark Angel
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Cindy, Thanks hon   *hugs*
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David2 thank you so much
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Thanks Angel glad you like  
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Sharon thank you hon  
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Lone Wolf, thank you for your lovely reply  
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Wow, thanks Jason   glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you Denise    
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What a lovely thing to say Sven, thanks  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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