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~Once Touched By You~
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~Once Touched By You~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Once Touched By You~ Your touch is like oxygen ... it alone allows me to breathe. You are all I require, You are all I receive. Like the miracle of morning rain, allows a fragile rose to grow ... Like the warmth of the midday sun, your touch grants my inner glow. I feel your essence ever near ... I inhale and take you in. Your touch grants my existence, now no longer able to see ... where you end ... and I begin. Janet Marie 4- my P.I.R. (smile) Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
beautiful |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Taking a deep breath! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Very Beautiful!!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, this is very very nice. loved the read, and I think so will your Mr. P.I.R Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
jan as always poetry in motion! this was simply beautiful. your partner in rhyme is one lucky person! take care and i love ya. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful Jm, as always. Marina |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Janet, This was very lovely, I enjoyed reading it immensely. David2 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
(sigh) Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfectly lovely!! An amazing poem...  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM, Beautiful for sure!! I am sure the it is for will think so too. Best wishes to you both!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
nice poem full of contentment which is very good for inspiration lucky lady to be so content gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
[in the taco bell dog's voice] I think I'm in love... =) "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Some people search a lifetime for the feeling of where they end and the love of their life begins. I gave up searching  but for beautiful poems such as this. Lovely JM.Carpe' Diem |
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