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rainchild
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0 posted 2000-04-14 04:29 PM


                                                    Dreamers                                                    

It's a dream that we are living,
a endless imagination.
Our pain, our fears,
are simply exaggerations.
We're born , we die and all that remains,
will be a vague memory in some dreamers brain.
Have courage, be strong, the journey's not long.
And after all, it's just a dream!




[This message has been edited by rainchild (edited 04-15-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-04-14 08:32 PM


Nice poem...but sometimes my life is more like a nightmare!    
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-14 08:35 PM


Sometimes the journey seems endless.  Good job.  I like the concept.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Cassanova
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since 2000-04-12
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3 posted 2000-04-14 08:57 PM


Wow! This is great, (a little small..LOL,) but great. "Life is but a dream sweetheart..."

Jason

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