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Hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich

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Seymour Tabin
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    Hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich

Two hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich.
Set there between two people bewitched.
They ogled and stared at each others eyes,
And whispered across invisible vies.

Each and their outgo walked on a rainbow.
A scenario structured of shadow.
They could not believe or savor the true,
This meetings impromptu out of the blue.

Hands crept across the table in reach.
Souls stretching out in lovers beseech.
Illusions barrier still held the stream,
Of the real and the end of each dream.

Their fingers did touch to nova the night.
And feelings did flare the brightest of bright.
The sound was a sigh like a babies new cry.
And that was the hold, of impossible lie.

Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore,
As each sank back into dreams once more.

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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 04-14-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I never knew that a tuna sandwich could be so romantic, but I guess anything's possible.
But I do know I enjoy all your poems
Liz
Martie
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Sy, I really love the idea of this--it is romantically beauiful...and distant adore I understand.
Denise
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3 posted 04-14-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very romantic, Sy!

Denise
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Though I loved your poem, I have to say, I don't like tuna..could it be a grilled cheese instead?  
netswan
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5 posted 04-14-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

hahahah, this was clever and delightfully
funny ----  I never knew that"sorry charlie"
had it so good.

Teresa King
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"Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore..."

I like it.... and I like Hot Chocolate too...
Seymour Tabin
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Elizabeth,
Oh yes tuna can be romantic. Glad you liked the poem. Love Sy

Martie,
Thank you so much for the understand. *L*

Denise,
Thank you dear. *L*

Poet deVine,
Sorry this one is strictly tuna. *L*

netswan,
Glad you enjoyed the sandwich.

Nan,
Thank you and me too on the hot chocolate. *L*
WhtDove
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Ooh hot chocolate! YUM!  Tuna I could eat, but don't care for it much anymore.
Romantic with or without the tuna on this one  
Seymour Tabin
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WhtDove,
Thank you for the nice comment, I thought everyone liked tuna? *L*
Janet Marie
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Their fingers did touch to nova the night.
And feelings did flare the brightest of bright.
The sound was a sigh like a babies new cry.
And that was the hold, of impossible lie.

Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore,
As each sank back into dreams once more.
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SY
I ADORE this poem!!
this is perfect...
what a perfect moment in time you have drawn for us here.
this goes on my fav by you list
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


RainbowGirl
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Sy: I've tried many different combinations in my time but tuna stuffed with chocolate is a new one..LOL  but if it has that effect, I'm game..  

HUGS

ps: Actually...if you added some mushrooms stuffed with stilton, some crisp lettuce and some toast lightly fried in garlic and fresh cream served with a little dill...it's growing on me...oh my!

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 04-16-2000).]
Pepper
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Lovely .... and yes, very romantic ..
And I love tuna, Sy .....  

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz
Seymour Tabin
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Janet,
You are so sweet, what a wonderful comment. *L*

Rainbow,
I think I would really have dreams after that tuna sandwich. *L*

Pepper,
Thank you sweet, you are a joy. *L*
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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Ah, sigh - isn't it a shame when you open your eyes and discover you've been dreaming - with those loving eyes still in your brain, and tuna sandwich haunting your taste buds!  Oh, man!

And of course, if you were awake, it's even worse at the end.

Yes, romantic and sweet.  Good title, too!
 
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