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Where Do You Go When You Dream?

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hsystems
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  Where Do You Go When You Dream?

Where do you go in the night, My Sweet Love,
While shadows lay silent and deep?
To what soaring heights does your spirit ascend,
While your eyelids are heavy with sleep?

What do you see, with the eyes of your soul -
What wonders do you look upon?
Are there colors to rival the rainbow,
And brightness that outshines the sun?

What do you hear, in that beautiful place,
As you listen with all of your heart?
Does the music of peace wrap around you,
And cause all your cares to depart?

And, will you allow me to join you,
To share in this vision, supreme?
I am eager to travel beside you,
So, where do you go, when you dream?

-Troy J. Hoecherl-

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 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
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Denise
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1 posted 04-14-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhh, this is so beautiful, Troy!

Denise
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I liked that a lot thanks.
David2
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Troy,
   I love love poetry and this was beautiful. Thanks alot!
     David2
Martie
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4 posted 04-14-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautiful verse and thought
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 04-14-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Troy,
Great poem.  Interesting thoughts you evoke.  I have often wondered the same about my love.  Very beautiful and full of love.  

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netswan
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Troy, so touching, so caring and so
much of wanting to share with your love.
This is excellent.  Your heart is made
of living gold.

Teresa King
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In dreams... we go to a place that no other can be.. It is our own special and unique haven.. ours to do with as we will.. Nice work here, my friend..
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Where do we go when we dream?  To that place inside of us that only we can find. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
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Lady Web
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This is a beautiful poem. I love it
devina
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This is utter beauty m'friend..You've portrayed a wonderful thought here!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

hsystems
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11 posted 04-15-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Wow!  You guys leave me speechless!  Thanks for all your kind words.


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
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Tara Simms
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I love the tenderness in this poem.  It's lovely!
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