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Where Do You Go When You Dream?
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Where Do You Go When You Dream? |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Where Do You Go When You Dream? Where do you go in the night, My Sweet Love, While shadows lay silent and deep? To what soaring heights does your spirit ascend, While your eyelids are heavy with sleep? What do you see, with the eyes of your soul - What wonders do you look upon? Are there colors to rival the rainbow, And brightness that outshines the sun? What do you hear, in that beautiful place, As you listen with all of your heart? Does the music of peace wrap around you, And cause all your cares to depart? And, will you allow me to join you, To share in this vision, supreme? I am eager to travel beside you, So, where do you go, when you dream? -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm[/URL] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is so beautiful, Troy! Denise |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
I liked that a lot thanks. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Troy, I love love poetry and this was beautiful. Thanks alot! David2  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful verse and thought |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Troy, Great poem. Interesting thoughts you evoke. I have often wondered the same about my love. Very beautiful and full of love.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Troy, so touching, so caring and so much of wanting to share with your love. This is excellent. Your heart is made of living gold. Teresa King |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
In dreams... we go to a place that no other can be.. It is our own special and unique haven.. ours to do with as we will.. Nice work here, my friend..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Where do we go when we dream? To that place inside of us that only we can find. . . Excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
This is a beautiful poem. I love it |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is utter beauty m'friend..You've portrayed a wonderful thought here!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Wow! You guys leave me speechless! Thanks for all your kind words. Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm[/URL] |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I love the tenderness in this poem. It's lovely! |
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