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An Angel's Humble Wish
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An Angel's Humble Wish |
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Friday New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 8Vaasa, Finland |
An Angel's Humble Wish I'm just a fallen angel who's struggling to find a home in the world, leaving heaven behind. I have lost my faith, I have lost my truth I sleep on the sidewalks when evenings are late I'm just one of billions in the world on a whole still I wish to be seen as one single soul Please smile at me and say something kind to make me feel better to give me peace of mind I wrote this after watching "City of Angels", with Meg Ryan and Nicholas Cage... Considering English isn't my mothertounge (I'm from Finland), this is quite good. I'm really not good at writing poems, but I do wish that someone might think this is worth reading.... |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Friday, this a great poem - very moving! Thanks for sharing, and Welcome to Passions!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Friday! This is a very touching poem and your English is great! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely poem. I sleep on the sidewalk when evening shadows move. I was inspired to write Samurai after watching Ghost Dog and Romeo must Die. James |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
City of angels is one of my most favorite movies of all time I bought it as soon as it was available to buy and never tire of watching it, sometimes watch it 2-3 times in a row. Nice place to find inspiration [This message has been edited by Beki (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Friday, this is really beautiful, an excellent piece! Welcome to Passions!!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions... I am personally overjoyed to welcome you, as both Finland and Sweden are very near and dear to my heart... You, along with your wonderful poetry are a pleasure to have among us...   |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
An excellent poem, my friend! Welcome to passions! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Friday, Welcome to Passions! Good luck with your English but you seem to have a great grasp on it right now. David2 |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I found it enchanting! Good job...I look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to our family.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Friday, Welcome to Passions!!! I never would have guessed that English was not your main language. Great job!!! Looking forward to reading more. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Friday....welcome to Passions, City of Angels is one of my favourite movies. Thankyou for sharing your work.Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've done well with this...The movie was excellent too!! Welcome to the family... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome! This was most definitely worth reading! Great job! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
excellant poem....I loved city of angels...and the music....I was inspired to write poetry after watching "Shakespeare In Love".....WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
This is a great poem! Welcome to passions- and never doubt your creativity! |
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Friday New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 8Vaasa, Finland |
Thanks! You're all so cute!!!! I'm sorry I haven't replied sooner, but I have had some problems getting access. I really want to thank you for your replies! I'm currently trying to write some more poems and will post them as soon as possible. Once again... Thank you! |
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