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INclan
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0 posted 2000-04-14 11:55 AM


Insatiable and
completely unfulfilled,
I write poetry...

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-14 12:50 PM


This is great, INclan!

Denise

INclan
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2 posted 2000-04-14 09:30 PM


Thank you, Denise.  It was a rough day.

INclan

Nan
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3 posted 2000-04-14 09:36 PM


Goody - Keep writing...
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4 posted 2000-04-14 10:04 PM


INclan~

Unfullfilled you say ?
Writing poetry is full
Great Haiku you pen

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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INclan
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5 posted 2000-04-15 02:39 PM


Thank you, Nan and Marge.  I promise to keep writing. I see more Haiku from Marge....I enjoy them as well!

INclan

Joannak
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6 posted 2000-04-15 03:42 PM


Poetry, music
a lovers' serenade to
an unfulfilled heart.

INclan, I believe your poetry creates music, and I hope it leaves you content.  I so enjoy reading your work.

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-04-16 11:09 AM


Inclan,
I Love this one...and I'm relating all too well.
(have you been peeking) *smile*
another perfect Haiku from you!
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



kaile
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8 posted 2000-04-20 10:39 AM


Feelings swirling round~
To get them in perspective~
I write poetry!

and that's why i attempt to write poetry... ")

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