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I Still Love You
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I Still Love You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Whenever you question things Or doubt the feelings true Whenever the clouds cross your path And color the feelings blue Its like the whole world crashing in Everything coming down on you When you think that love has paled Replaced by something new When life seems to be so much Dreams are impossible too Think of how much I’ve been there And how much we’ve been through Time seemed to magnify the love The faster time flew Dream now of nothing but good things And that I still love you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, JML! Very nice! Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Touching -- and flows well. Keep writing. Teresa King |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully romantic  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whenever you question things Or doubt the feelings true Whenever the clouds cross your path And color the feelings blue Its like the whole world crashing in Everything coming down on you ------------- Think of how much I’ve been there And how much we’ve been through Time seemed to magnify the love The faster time flew Dream now of nothing but good things And that I still love you ------------- *SIGH* nothing like sweet devotion to calm a worried heart. beautiful jer, very. stalking you always, your jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Friday New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 8Vaasa, Finland |
I guess... wow... I simply HAD to show this poem to my boyfriend... And he actually liked it!!! Considering that he hates reading poetry, that's really good news!!! The moon shines bright in such a night as this when the sweet wind did gently kiss the trees and they made no noise in such a night Shakespeare... I think. I simply love these lines. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Sighing as usual at your dreamy rhymes...(sigh)  This is a very warm and heartfelt poem sir. I love how you ended it - very nice. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Some one is very lucky. Gosh you make me sigh. Nothing like letting that some one special know how you feel. Again I just love you writings your bud kitkat |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Can I just say. . . well, you know what I'm going to say, don't you? This is an excellent poem. . . you do have that gift my friend. . . And they ask me if there are more like me! They obviously haven't met you!! Good work! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
JML~ Lovely sweet words of passion you write here. Loved it Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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