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I Still Love You

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 04-14-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Whenever you question things
Or doubt the feelings true
Whenever the clouds cross your path
And color the feelings blue
Its like the whole world crashing in
Everything coming down on you
When you think that love has paled
Replaced by something new
When life seems to be so much
Dreams are impossible too

Think of how much Ive been there
And how much weve been through
Time seemed to magnify the love
The faster time flew
Dream now of nothing but good things
And that I still love you

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-14-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, JML! Very nice!

Denise
netswan
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2 posted 04-14-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Touching -- and flows well.
Keep writing.

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Wonderfully romantic  
Janet Marie
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4 posted 04-14-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Whenever you question things
Or doubt the feelings true
Whenever the clouds cross your path
And color the feelings blue
Its like the whole world crashing in
Everything coming down on you
-------------
Think of how much Ive been there
And how much weve been through
Time seemed to magnify the love
The faster time flew
Dream now of nothing but good things
And that I still love you
-------------

*SIGH*

nothing like sweet devotion to calm a worried heart.
beautiful jer, very.
stalking you always,
your jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Friday
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5 posted 04-14-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Friday   Email Friday   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Friday

I guess... wow... I simply HAD to show this poem to my boyfriend... And he actually liked it!!! Considering that he hates reading poetry, that's really good news!!!

 The moon shines bright
in such a night as this
when the sweet wind
did gently kiss the trees
and they made no noise
in such a night

Shakespeare... I think. I simply love these lines.

poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 04-14-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sighing as usual at your dreamy rhymes...(sigh)  
This is a very warm and heartfelt poem sir.  I love how you ended it -  very nice.
kitkat
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7 posted 04-15-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Some one is very lucky. Gosh you make me sigh. Nothing like letting that some one special know how you feel. Again I just love you writings
your bud
kitkat
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8 posted 04-15-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Can I just say. . . well, you know what I'm going to say, don't you?

This is an excellent poem. . . you do have that gift my friend. . .

And they ask me if there are more like me!  They obviously haven't met you!!

Good work!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

tracie66
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Victoria, Australia


9 posted 04-16-2000 04:07 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

JML~
Lovely sweet words of passion you write here. Loved it
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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