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Don't think it's over (ideas for a title)

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killer222
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0 posted 04-14-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for killer222   Email killer222   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for killer222


I felt like life was over
I felt like this was the end

I thought that I had been punished
I thought I couldn't carry on

I wanted her in my arms
I wanted to cry forever

Never have I hurt so much
Never have I felt a pain like this
Never could I prepare myself for this
Never could I expect this loneliness

I didn't think I could ever love again
I didn't think my heart would feel for another girl

I can't belive I this joy has returned
I can't explain how happy I am

I know now that I was wrong
I know that I have again found love

My life is back on track
My life now has a meaning
My heart beats once more for someone
My heart now belongs to another





 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 04-14-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ideas? --Resurrection?  Just a suggestion...
EagleOne
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2 posted 04-14-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Oh yeah!...I've been there, and you have captured it well. As for a title, find a quiet place, close your eyes, and it will come.
Pepper
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I like Serenity's suggestion for a title .. it seems to fit perfectly ...
Very heartfelt piece, Killer ......

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
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How about Reborn?
killer222
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5 posted 04-14-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for killer222   Email killer222   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for killer222

I think Reborn and Resurrection are both good.
It feels like you are back from the dead.
You have a new want a new lust for life.

Thanks for the suggestions


 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

JamesMichael
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enjoyed reading this...how about the title..No more loneliness.    James
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7 posted 04-15-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Here's to keeping hope alive

Jeffrey
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