Don't think it's over (ideas for a title)

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Open Poetry #6

Don't think it's over (ideas for a title)

killer222
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 48
Northolt,Middlesex,England

0 posted 2000-04-14 06:42 AM

I felt like life was over
I felt like this was the end

I thought that I had been punished
I thought I couldn't carry on

I wanted her in my arms
I wanted to cry forever

Never have I hurt so much
Never have I felt a pain like this
Never could I prepare myself for this
Never could I expect this loneliness

I didn't think I could ever love again
I didn't think my heart would feel for another girl

I can't belive I this joy has returned
I can't explain how happy I am

I know now that I was wrong
I know that I have again found love

My life is back on track
My life now has a meaning
My heart beats once more for someone
My heart now belongs to another

"shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-14 06:51 AM

ideas? --Resurrection? Just a suggestion...

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2000-04-14 08:43 AM

Oh yeah!...I've been there, and you have captured it well. As for a title, find a quiet place, close your eyes, and it will come.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 2000-04-14 11:11 AM

I like Serenity's suggestion for a title .. it seems to fit perfectly ...
Very heartfelt piece, Killer ......

"This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-04-14 11:21 AM

How about Reborn?

killer222
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 48
Northolt,Middlesex,England

5 posted 2000-04-14 11:41 AM

I think Reborn and Resurrection are both good.
It feels like you are back from the dead.
You have a new want a new lust for life.

Thanks for the suggestions

"shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-04-14 03:40 PM

enjoyed reading this...how about the title..No more loneliness. James

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

7 posted 2000-04-15 12:56 PM

Here's to keeping hope alive

Jeffrey

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