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The crime of love .

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angelswing
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0 posted 04-14-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angelswing

The crime of love

The truth of love is that itís crime,
Illegal,
Bad,
Taboo,
People who commit this sin are evil,
Yes itís true .
Confession can appease the soul,
But the lies come shining through,
Your heart is locked eternally,
In a small cell made for two .
You canít break free,
You canít escape,
No matter how you try,
The sentence is so long and hard,
Make that life times 5 .
If you try to get away,
It will all rush back to you,
You cannot lose the thin blue lines,
That travel two by two .
The lines just close around your neck,
Back to the lonely cell,
Your left alone with just your thoughts,
Your lifeís a living hell .
Some loves are only minor,
A stupid crush or fling,
In court these crimes,
Will bear small charge,
A lonely monthly thing,
But when the love is purist,
Good,
And right,
And true,
The charge is hard upon your head,
Thereís no where to run to .
Whatís this I hear you asking,
Howíd you bloody know ?
The answer is quite simpleton,
Itís plain,
And I will tell,
My punishment is hard and long,
With my whole life to serve,
Cannot you,
Find the agony,
I have because of love ?

Written by Tom Baker .  



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netswan
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1 posted 04-14-2000 05:25 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Clever -- glad you can see the humor
in these things.  This flows great and
I enjoyed the analogy of love.



 Teresa King
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angelswing
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2 posted 04-14-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thankyou netswan, all my poetry has some kind of link to love, usualy lack of or to much ! your reply made me feel a little bit better, I am glad you liked it .
Stay Lucky Tom .


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infinat3 sadn3ss
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3 posted 04-14-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

well tom , if the dictionary had a definion for love , this should be it ! . sarcasm is the only way to fight the pain .
angelswing
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4 posted 05-08-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Cheers cabes, you always see things my way, I glad atleast one person understands what it is like . I suppose most people on Net poets are like that though, we all have that unders standing .
L.of.L. Tom .


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